Romance In the Sunflower Field

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Serene waves of blooms dance in the setting sun Ushering in the evening hours with the breeze Nodding crowns of sunflowers in perfect harmony Fields in every direction as in a dream of whimsy Love conquers all blissfully running through tall fields Obsessed with keeping you alive in my mind’s eye Wave the sunflowers swaying along most playfully Enchanted imagery in the sunset faces to eternity Romantic memories of you and me forever in my heart AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on May 26, 2021 for contest SUNFLOWER sponsored by MALABIKA RAY CHOUDHURY - RANKED 2ND

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/2/2021 8:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful write and picture. Great memories are the best. Have a blessed day.................

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/2/2021 10:28:00 PM

Thank you very much, Paula. Most appreciated ~

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/1/2021 11:29:00 AM

So beautifully articulated Line - one romantic line flows effortlessly into the next. "Nodding crowns," "dream of whimsy," "love...running through tall fields" so many eye-catching, memorable lines creating this field of of lovers flowers at sunset. Congratulations on your win! Blessings of bright sunflowers to you!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/2/2021 10:28:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sam ~ most appreciated