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Rolling Thunder (In My Chest)

I hear the willows weeping in the corners of my mind, I feel the sand go slipping through the hourglass of time. I see the catfish whiskers, more like tentacles, thick and black, I sense the wasp nest growing as I wait for their attack. I watch the full moon rising as the sun sets in the west, I feel the thunder rolling like a pounding in my chest. I hear the barn owl's question, though the answer no one knows, as the spider weaves her magic in the poison mistletoe. ©Danielle White

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/6/2009 4:11:00 PM
Danielle this is such a wonderful write. Each phrase is so descriptive. I really like it. Laurie
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Date: 2/6/2009 12:48:00 PM
Danielle A strong flowing poem with nature being used to express yourself, well done I say.This is a favorite for me! I love your strong imagery too.I love it!!!!!! Love Laura :)
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Date: 2/6/2009 8:17:00 AM
woe, talk about dramatic. This read, with the many images really talks of internal observations and questions. Marvelous rhyme scheme and just so very well written. Michael
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