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Rolling Passion---Haiku

holding me softly
the sweat slowly dripping down
heart to heart embrace

lovepassionromancehaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

February 10, 2011 at 11:46 PM

Yes, the title fits this splendidly!

Robert Pettit

February 9, 2011 at 2:26 PM

Very descriptive with so few words.

Michael J. Falotico

October 15, 2010 at 2:36 PM

Thank you Brandee for stoping by to read my work...I love this Haiku, I can see we write similar Haiku on love...Very enjoyed and will continue to go through more of your work...always Michael

James Fraser

October 15, 2010 at 2:33 PM

McBlimey, I need to open a window after reading this hot shortie. Thank you ever so much for your lovely comments on 'The Clever Ape to the Horrible Human' it's basically all of us > have a lovely weekend >> James :)