Rolling Love


As I saw them all line up in the grey alley,
my mind was blown away by the HONKY TONK WOMEN,
but I got away from their skilled allure 
lest they captured my wayward passion to PAINT IT BLACK,
turn me into a gambler of love, rolling as TUMBLIN DICE.
That was when I felt the WILD HORSES run 
as the blood of desire in my veins,
enticing me to chase the changing charm of RUBY TUESDAY,
but I couldn’t get her UNDER MY THUMB.
I understood YOU CAN”T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU WANT.
So, like the ROLLING STONES I drifted
to be at the doorstep of ANGIE, I lost, 
and see my love still glisten in her sad eyes.
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Mckeithan Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 3:17 PM
Congrats on your placement in my contest Subimal. I like how you managed to escape those wild Honky Tonk women. You are stronger than I would have been
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 8:57 AM
Thank you so much, Oliver for the placement and your comment.
Fowler Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 7:04 AM
What a great use of the chosen words. You do it well Subminal. :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 8:56 AM
Thank you so much, Linda for your wonderful comments.
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