Courtney Courtney Poet Free verse

Rolling Bottle

missing you here by my side, 
having you there in her eyes. 
it just doesn't help me here, 
and I feel I have lied. 
gave you a perception, 
that wasn't too clear. 
and now thats an empty bottle, 
it's rolling down the stairs.

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Robert Pettit July 12, 2012 at 2:31 PM Interesting write. I wonder how many different interpretations of your poem you will be able to get from others on this site. Courtney Courtney July 12, 2012 at 3:46 PM thank you Robert, I meant it as to refer to a past or ending love being as empty as the bottle when it reaches to stair bottom.

Andrea Dietrich June 30, 2012 at 1:22 AM ruth, I really love this short and simple poem that is not so simple in its meaning! Great job with this. Courtney Courtney July 11, 2012 at 8:06 PM some times love is just an empty bottle rolling down the stairs Courtney Courtney June 30, 2012 at 7:52 PM thank you Andrea, short but sweet.