Rolling

Still rolling with the times Still rolling with my rhymes Still having my good and bad Still feeling slightly mad Still I keep my chin up high Still I often wonder why Still rolling my head and eye Still I love and must cry Still rolling as my heart beats on My rolling shall stop when heart beat gone

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Susan Ashley

Date: 9/16/2017 8:34:00 PM

Still your poetry makes me smile :) A wonderful write Niall, I love your last two lines especially! I hope you have a great rest of the weekend my poetic friend! :)))

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/17/2017 5:13:00 AM

Hi Susan , it always makes me happy to see others smile ::))) thank you for smiling , one smile equals two ::)))))))))) hugs

Jean Murray

Date: 9/14/2017 6:30:00 PM

I like the repletion in this Niall. Like a train rolling along a track. Keep rolling out those poems please.

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/15/2017 1:31:00 AM

Hi Jean , glad you enjoyed my friend ,, like that song rollen,rollen, rollen along ::))) hugs happy friday feeling

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/14/2017 12:27:00 PM

Oh Niall a melancholy write. Come on outside and play; how about hide and seek at twilight, or jumping from the hay mow to learn how it feels to fly. or just sitting under the hickory in the middle of the back field seeing who can tell the most outrageous tales.

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/14/2017 5:13:00 PM

Hi Patricia , very nice comment thank you my friend ::))) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/14/2017 2:02:00 AM

- Positive, optimistic and happy ... keep on ..."rolling":))) - Every day have new opportunities, Niall - Best wishes for a lovely Thursday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/14/2017 11:18:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise , thank you for comment my friend , yes every day brand new ::))))) hugs to you this Thursday :)