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Rocks nor Concrete

I feel best in nature far from city blocks.
Peace comes from viewing God's beautiful stages.
Medicinal are streams, trees and even rocks.
On natural land every sense engages.
I so love all of outdoors genuine sounds,
my happy inner child playfully abounds.
All earthly vistas mankind has not tainted
are heavenly views and feels that God painted.

Gray, gloomy and cold are the steel and concrete
of large, sprawling cities built to fulfill greed.
Clustered strangers press buttons to cross a street
and are dwarfed by buildings for which land did bleed.
There are blocks of humans from rich to homeless
where trauma and apathy leave hearts boneless.
Even in June, I loathe how cold cities feel.
I have no guess why to many they appeal.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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George Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 8:23 PM
These are exactly my thoughts too. "All earthly vistas mankind has not tainted are heavenly views and feels that God painted." How true. I too love nature that's not tainted by man. The towering concrete jungles, suffocate me. Have no guess why to many they appeal. A beautiful poem. This will be a winner, I feel. All the Best.
Dietrich Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 9:26 PM
Great thinking coming up with these, Caycay. I got a different idea from what I first told you. I doubt nobody else will think of it. Fun contest, huh? I think this is worthy of a win
Wolf Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 8:25 PM
I'm with you about a gazillion percent. Never saw anything in big cities, except fear and male whores in business suits... As for the skyscrapers in the picture you posted with the poem, look again: Don't they look like giant 'Pez dispensers?!' I thought so, anyway. ~ Three Eyes
Hind Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 6:04 PM
A great take on this contest- should be considered as a winner, and for its truth. Beautiful.
Rolland Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 5:29 PM
sometimes we have to make a choice, live in city or outdoor in nature this is very beautiful poetry that touch me a lot wishes
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