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rock paper scissors

You used to be my strength, my rock I looked to you for comforting thoughts Till you thinned like paper Your caring tapered And like scissors you cut me off Received 1st place in PD's "rock paper scissors" contest

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Date: 3/28/2014 11:42:00 AM
Beautiful write! glad I stumbled on this. metaphorically superb. congrats on win.// paul
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Date: 3/28/2014 3:06:00 AM
I really like this limerick. Congrats for your featured poem! ^_^
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Date: 3/25/2014 9:37:00 PM
Congratulations! A brilliant piece using rock, paper, scissors incorporated in the lines. Superb message too.
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Date: 6/19/2011 11:12:00 AM
Congrats on the win Susan. I always like a limerick that is well written. Mike
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Date: 6/18/2011 10:55:00 AM
Simply brilliant on this theme!! Many Congrats Susan on your big win!!!...love, gautami
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Date: 6/17/2011 11:33:00 AM
Many congrats on your well deserved first place win in 'Scissors', Susan : )
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Date: 6/17/2011 11:03:00 AM
Very creative work on the topic..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 6/17/2011 9:54:00 AM
Congrats Susan on your well deserved win. Enjoyed this, best wishes Em :)
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Date: 6/17/2011 4:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your shared 1st place win in P.D.'s contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/17/2011 3:35:00 AM
My personal favourite, well done on your win
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Date: 6/17/2011 1:29:00 AM
Very skilfully and poetically penned, Susan! Congratulations on your win! Love and warm wishes, Robert.
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Date: 6/16/2011 9:30:00 PM
very awesome use of metaphors here, Susan :) enjoyed this, Super congrats on your win :) Keep rocking with your writes :D
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Date: 6/16/2011 8:43:00 PM
Nicely done, nicely won, Susan. Me likes.
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Date: 6/16/2011 8:38:00 PM
Susan, I really liked this one. Great write. One of the things I really like about these contests is that I get to read poems I may have missed otherwise. I'm glad I did not miss yours. Congrats! Cyndi
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Date: 6/16/2011 8:10:00 PM
A great write...congrats on your BIG win.. BG
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Date: 6/16/2011 6:10:00 PM
Truly well done Susan. Congratulations on your big win up there with the other excellent winners. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/16/2011 5:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved placement, Susan. Enjoy the limelight!! :-)
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Date: 6/16/2011 5:11:00 PM
Dear Susan, I knew this would place high! I'm so happy to see your poem in first place. Way to go! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/16/2011 5:00:00 PM
Much enjoyed, thank you for entering in my contest, and congrats on your win,..p.d.
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Date: 6/16/2011 4:43:00 PM
Congratsm Susan on your first place win in PD's cool contest my friend..so honored to be sharing first place with u luv..
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Date: 6/16/2011 4:33:00 PM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Susan
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Date: 6/16/2011 3:58:00 PM
Short, but very powerful...love, love, love this one. An amazing first place winner!!!
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Date: 6/16/2011 1:11:00 PM
Dear Susan, thanks for your comments on the co-write with Jack Horne. We're looking forward to reading contest entries. They don't have to be new poems as long as they fit the theme. Best wishes in PD's contest with this excellent entry! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/16/2011 5:51:00 AM
thanks for the support,..p.d.
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Date: 6/14/2011 12:12:00 PM
Excellent approach on the rock, paper theme.loved it. Best wishes to you Susan for this one too..
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