Rock Candy Whiskey

Aged and mellowed, golden whiskey in a wide mouth Mason jar.
Poured over sweet rock candy, was the guaranteed cure,
of ticklish throats; sprained ankles; hair loss; hang nails and more.
Always kept on hand, for times of desperate need,
of which Grandpa had a profound proclivity for.
No glass nor tablespoon was needed to dispense this elixir.
Just twist the ring, pop the lid, up end the jar and let it slide 
down your parched throat..ummm, I mean,  soar throat.
I remember well, my first bout with laryngitis at the age of seven.
Grandpa hurried off, to get the magical jar of homemade "Cure".
Minutes later, he came in, carrying the jar like a precious jewel.
Pouring some of that honey hued nectar into a large serving spoon.
Tasting it first, making sure it hadn't gone bad, of course.
Then he slipped the spoon edge between my lips.
Boy-howdy, my eyes watered, I coughed for a spell.  
Then slept like a baby.



Entry for:  The Road To Well Ville
Hostess:  Deborah Guzzi
Placement: 6th

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/29/2010 12:39:00 AM
That sound fabulous Mmmmmmm Congrats on the win Paula- and bless your Grandpa too
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Date: 9/17/2010 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations Paula on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "The Road to Well Ville" Love, Carol
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Date: 9/16/2010 8:13:00 PM
yum yum, how did ya do it with candy?? This is a really clever entry and I am glad I got to see it. Congratulations on a most interesting cure. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/16/2010 5:44:00 PM
Congratulations Paula on your 6th place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/16/2010 5:33:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your big win in Deb's contest.. a great entry ..enjoy another big win tonight with luv..
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Date: 9/16/2010 3:35:00 PM
Congrartulations on a great poem and win Paula. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/16/2010 3:06:00 PM
Great poem, Paula. Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn (Some say whiskey alone will cure anything LOL)
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Date: 8/24/2010 6:07:00 AM
Good one...funny...sounds like nyquil!
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Date: 8/23/2010 10:50:00 PM
Enjoying this monday night reading, thank you for the read,, enjoyed your write and good luck on the contest..P.D.
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