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Robot's Last Kiss

Robot’s Last Kiss Can rain fall? Will loons call? Loss is tall now King, Blow Kiss Fish sail in thin air. With fan claps, JC raps away, as night falls. Fight stalls last kiss, Stars trip robots in spring.

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Daniel Cwiak

Date: 7/3/2010 9:29:00 AM

Congrats on your win in the contest with this unusual subject! Great write! Dan C

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2010 11:32:00 PM

congratulations, Marie!

James Fraser

Date: 7/2/2010 11:30:00 AM

Marie, many congratulations on your win in Nikko's contest. It was some challenge >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/2/2010 9:26:00 AM

Congratulations Marie on your fabulous poem being in the spotlight in Nikko Palmario's contest "Life without U & Me". It sure was a challenge. Love, Carol

Tirzah Conway

Date: 7/2/2010 8:58:00 AM

Congrat's on your win!~Tirzah~

Date: 7/2/2010 8:34:00 AM

Interesting approach to the topic. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Nikko's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/2/2010 8:31:00 AM

Hi Marie :) --congrats on being among the winners with this very unique write of yours! --nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/2/2010 7:45:00 AM

Congrats Marie on your winning poem in Nikko's great contest with this cool write and win without the letters m e and u as only u can do... enjoy my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii .. AlohA..at 4 a.m..