Robot's Last Kiss

Robot’s Last Kiss

Can rain fall?
Will loons call?
Loss is tall now King,
Blow Kiss Fish 
sail in thin air.

With fan claps,
JC raps away, 
as night falls.
Fight stalls last kiss,
Stars trip robots in spring.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Cwiak Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 9:29 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest with this unusual subject! Great write! Dan C
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 11:32 PM
congratulations, Marie!
Fraser Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 11:30 AM
Marie, many congratulations on your win in Nikko's contest. It was some challenge >> James
Brown Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations Marie on your fabulous poem being in the spotlight in Nikko Palmario's contest "Life without U & Me". It sure was a challenge. Love, Carol
Conway Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 8:58 AM
Congrat's on your win!~Tirzah~
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July 2, 2010 at 8:34 AM
Interesting approach to the topic. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Nikko's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen
K. Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 8:31 AM
Hi Marie :) --congrats on being among the winners with this very unique write of yours! --nikko :)
Sweetheart Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 7:45 AM
Congrats Marie on your winning poem in Nikko's great contest with this cool write and win without the letters m e and u as only u can do... enjoy my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii .. AlohA..at 4 a.m..
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