Robins

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Two robins made a nest in my garage~ delusional sanctuary mirage, looking for safety, nurture in a house with a lurcher, an aviary of bird poop potage 4/6/22 Poetry soup: syllable counter

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David Drowley

Date: 8/24/2022 12:27:00 PM

I liked this one. Congratulations on your wording.I would have made a big mess of the bird "potage."

Jo Chamberlain
Date: 8/24/2022 2:29:00 PM

Thank you, I have to say it's the first time I've used that word in my work, but I think it works well. :-)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/29/2022 8:57:00 PM

Poetry Poop at its finest, Joanna. Thanks for the chuckle. Cheers, Gershon

Jo Chamberlain
Date: 6/30/2022 12:02:00 AM

You're welcome. :-)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/22/2022 11:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Tania’s contest, Joanna, great limerick. Enjoy your day & God bless

Jo Chamberlain
Date: 6/22/2022 12:34:00 PM

Thank you.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/21/2022 3:37:00 AM

Probably the robins sensed that the owner was kind and friendly, Joanna! Congratulations on your fine win ~ Regards // paul

Jo Chamberlain
Date: 6/21/2022 4:37:00 AM

Thank you, they still come back to visit. :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2022 7:20:00 PM

Congrats on the win, Joanna

Jo Chamberlain
Date: 6/20/2022 11:57:00 PM

Thank you.

Terry Flood

Date: 6/20/2022 2:56:00 AM

Those robins can be a bit bird brained in their choice of nesting location. We had a pair nesting in our log pile. What did we do…. Bought some new logs! Congrats on your win, Joanna. Terry

Jo Chamberlain
Date: 6/20/2022 4:30:00 AM

Haha yes indeed. We had some fly tape in the shed and we noticed bird feathers stuck to it. They won't try eating the flies of there again.