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Robin Redbreast


When I was just a young girl, long ago,
     for me, the grand debut of spring became
my special mission in the month of March-
     to see a robin redbreast was my game.

A Robin redbreast meant a sign of spring-
     oft spotted hunting worms- intent on sounds.
Day after day, I longed to see my prize;
     from one window onto the next- made rounds.

And then one day, my luck would surely come.
     I'd see one hop and then stand still- and knew
that spring began and nature was in bloom-
     as baby robins soon will come to view.

High in one eave of our carport each year,
     there was a robin nest with eggs of blue,
where mother robins kept them dry and warm;
     their faithful mates would come and visit too.

What fun it was, at last, to see them hatch-
     and mama making trips to find their food.
So many hours I spent on our front porch;
     to watch from birth to flight was quite a treat!

So soon it came- the time to leave their home;
     from nest to ground- to fly, they all were led.
One day I stood too close to one of them-
     and mother robin pecked me on my head!

Year after year, our robin's nest was filled-
     new birds reworked the roost to their delight.
My memories from those days- I hold dear-
     with robins- spring gave birth within my sight.
 

February 19, 2021

Contest: A Visitor
Sponsor: Julia Ward
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 2/28/2021 10:48:00 AM
It must have been thrilling to see them leave the nest for the first time, Sandra. Like you, I was always told the robin was the first sign of spring. Beautiful poem! Congrats on your first place in the contest. Hugs, carolyn
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Date: 2/28/2021 8:10:00 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my Spring Birds Challenge with your lovely poem, I wait for the robins too and your image is wonderful, well done _Constance
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Date: 2/28/2021 6:20:00 AM
Very sweet, Sandra. Congrats on your top win~
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Date: 2/19/2021 3:06:00 PM
an absolutely charming spring poem Sandra:-) hugs jan xx
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