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One of my favourite birds is the Robin Redbreast I see him on my lawn with his bright scarlet chest A territorial bird, he’ll guard his piece of the land If another bird ventures in then he will take a stand When I’m digging my border, he will perch in a shrub fly near to my spade then eat a small weevil or grub He is ever so friendly, he visits me every day I’m so thrilled this little Robin is here to stay Writing Challenge, October 2019 - Bird - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Dear Heart -Wiishkobe Ode 10/15/19

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Date: 11/3/2019 11:50:00 PM
Sweet poem. I love birds. Best on the contest... Ann
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Date: 11/1/2019 5:13:00 PM
Very sweet LOVE it! Congrats
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Date: 10/22/2019 7:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jan
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Date: 10/21/2019 9:09:00 PM
Jan, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this exceptional poem, I love robins, here in Canada they represent that Spring has arrived. I like how they claim their little territory, like a backyard !
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Date: 10/21/2019 1:33:00 PM
So beautiful Jan, you deserved your placement with this poem. Comgratulations!!! ~ Beryl
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Date: 10/21/2019 12:06:00 PM
Congratulations for your win. I love this poem. Very nice Jan :)
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Date: 10/21/2019 10:28:00 AM
I enjoyed this delightful poem, Jan. You chose an inspiring bird. At this time of year we get lots of robins coming over to enjoy our mild winter, and I love to see them in the garden. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs // paul
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Date: 10/20/2019 11:16:00 PM
The robin is a dear friend. Congratulation on your high placement.
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Date: 10/20/2019 6:50:00 PM
what a wonderful story....beautifully penned, congratulations on your win :) hugs
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Date: 10/20/2019 4:45:00 PM
Great verse,Jan, congratulations on your win. Hugs
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Date: 10/20/2019 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations! I really liked the image you painted of working in your garden with the little Robin hopping around:)
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Date: 10/20/2019 1:24:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/19/2019 4:45:00 PM
:)
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Date: 10/17/2019 8:04:00 PM
Thanks for introducing us! So nice!
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Date: 10/17/2019 5:25:00 PM
Nice tribute to one of our feathered friends! Where would we be without them? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/16/2019 7:39:00 PM
My favorite bird, the harbinger of Spring here in Chicago. Nicely done, Jan! :) gw
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Date: 10/16/2019 8:50:00 AM
Thanks for the introduction to your red breasted friend. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 10/15/2019 10:51:00 PM
Hello Jan … bird watching is my favourite hobby. To have a bird like your robin is heaven sent for me. We do have robin redbreasts here, but we only see them in winter when they come out of the forests. The red breast is scarlet red, and like your delightful robin, they are quite friendly - thank you Jan - Lindsay
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Date: 10/15/2019 9:14:00 PM
Jan, love your sweet robin poem, lovely imagery, robins can be so sweet and entertaining and usually a first sign of Spring! hugs
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Date: 10/15/2019 6:33:00 PM
a lovely poem, jan, and a perfect one for the contest - best of luck! the robins we have around here look different from the one you've pictured, though - they're bigger and not nearly as cute...
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Date: 10/15/2019 6:11:00 PM
Nicely done, but I wonder how these marauders earned public respect? Aloha! Rico
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Date: 10/15/2019 6:07:00 PM
Such a lovely piece Jan, I remember growing up in the countryside seek h many a Robin especially during the winter months. Have a blessed week, Gordon
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Date: 10/15/2019 3:09:00 PM
Awww. Love this. Good luck with the contest Jan... :)
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Date: 10/15/2019 3:04:00 PM
This is as precious as the robin itself. xomo
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Date: 10/15/2019 2:53:00 PM
All I saw was the word breast so I had to read it, I Love it my sweet friend!!
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