Robin Hood

When lambs become lions And oppression, nevermore, Men will live in Peace.

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/8/2010 5:07:00 PM

food for thought here for sure, Francine. In the above perspective...men ,in other words will never have peace....interesting...the only possible way other than that is for the Lion to become lamb...Enjoyed the thoughts good senryu.. thanks for the comment.-Robert

Joe Flach

Date: 5/5/2010 9:13:00 PM

I can only wish I live to see that day. Nice thought. Nice Senryu. Thanks for taking the time to comment on some of my poems. Joe

Larry Belt

Date: 5/5/2010 8:17:00 AM

Nice Francine....I enjoyed.....Larry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/5/2010 5:21:00 AM

Nicely done, Francine. Your message is certainly true, but I wonder if we will ever reach that point. Just last night we were talking about how all this attention to "spreading the wealth around" reminded us of Robin Hood. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/5/2010 1:40:00 AM

i like the way you think on this one comparing it to Robbin hood , what an awesome write,..p.d.

Skat A

Date: 5/4/2010 10:27:00 PM

GOOD BEGGINING WRITE, ENJOYED