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How many colors in jealousy? The participants - a favorite child, parents, and a rainbow of siblings. The lining feels good and comfortable for the swaddled tale bearer, enough so the dreamer dreams of being in charge, though being the littlest lamb. Out in the deep, dark woods where witches build candyland and wolves in sheep’s clothing watch with ravenous eyes for the innocent, a child strolls on the red carpet, listening and watching for misbehavior so he can run away to daddy who will set straight the miscreants. A falling away of a robe, a pretty handmade coat - in his underclothes and in too far deep his mood is angry and shocked. He knew they would pull him out. He thinks, “Boy, they’ll get it good this time.” ……….. confused, they’ve thrown him at strangers, and away he goes. He can’t wrap his mind around the impertinence. He’s shaking… He’s scared. He’s driven so far from home. But his faith is his fuel in his belly. His wake cannot happen with no body. No one is jealous of him in this caravan. However the one true God is jealous for him and has a plan…a precious plan… It is a plan of reconciliation. It is a story of salvation. Dreams do come true. 3/19/2023

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Date: 5/4/2023 7:18:00 AM
Lovely. Enjoyed every bit of it thanks..
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Date: 3/21/2023 12:01:00 PM
- A great story, Kim - Jealousy never leads to anything good - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2023 4:40:00 PM
True
Date: 3/20/2023 10:22:00 PM
Wow, the story of Joseph, one of my favorite Bible stories Kim, well done!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2023 11:04:00 AM
Thank you, BJ!
Date: 3/20/2023 7:00:00 PM
Jealousy is evil. Kim, your mind crafted such fantastic arts. And this piece just fit this time of the year. Superb!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/20/2023 8:21:00 PM
Thank you, Fin!
Date: 3/20/2023 2:10:00 PM
Wow, Kim! What a wonderfully penned take on the betrayal of Joseph by his brothers. One can just feel his emotions as you describe his dilemma…and how God has a great, redeeming plan for him. Excellent poem! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/20/2023 3:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Laura!
Date: 3/19/2023 7:34:00 PM
Evocative and creative, Kim. We all experience resentment sometimes, but as I read about your poem's beautiful ending and forgiving approach, I understood that anger never relates to something positive until there's a confluence of views.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2023 7:38:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad, for your thoughtful comment!
Date: 3/19/2023 1:09:00 PM
Jealousy we encounter from time to time, but it never leads to anything productive unless there is the meeting of minds--as I read of the positive ending to your poem and a plan of reconciliation. Dreams come true, as you say.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2023 5:18:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay! :)
Date: 3/19/2023 12:59:00 PM
I like the creative angle you give to this narrative, Kim. The coat of many colors has always appealed to me. A lesson to be learned here...to stay away from jealousy and favoritism. ~ Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2023 5:18:00 PM
Thank you, Paul!
Date: 3/19/2023 12:13:00 PM
Isn't jealously green? Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2023 12:22:00 PM
Joseph’s brothers were jealous of him, true?

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