Notes About The Poem

Robed In Jealousy

How many colors in jealousy?
The participants - a favorite child,
parents, and a rainbow of siblings.
The lining feels good and comfortable
for the swaddled tale bearer, enough so
the dreamer dreams of being in charge,
though being the littlest lamb.

Out in the deep, dark woods where witches
build candyland and wolves in sheep’s clothing
watch with ravenous eyes for the innocent,
a child strolls on the red carpet,
listening and watching for misbehavior
so he can run away to daddy
who will set straight the miscreants.

A falling away of a robe, a pretty handmade coat -
in his underclothes and in too far deep
his mood is angry and shocked.

He knew they would pull him out.
He thinks, “Boy, they’ll get it good
this time.” ………..

confused, they’ve thrown him at strangers,
and away he goes. He can’t wrap his mind
around the impertinence. He’s shaking…

He’s scared. He’s driven so far from home.
But his faith is his fuel in his belly. His wake
cannot happen with no body.

No one is jealous of him in this caravan.
However the one true God is jealous for him
and has a plan…a precious plan…

It is a plan of reconciliation. It is a story
of salvation. Dreams do come true.

3/19/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Joel Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 7:18 AM
Lovely. Enjoyed every bit of it thanks..
Andresen Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 12:01 PM
- A great story, Kim - Jealousy never leads to anything good - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 4:40 PM
True
Legros Kelley Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 10:22 PM
Wow, the story of Joseph, one of my favorite Bible stories Kim, well done!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 11:04 AM
Thank you, BJ!
Chuuk Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 7:00 PM
Jealousy is evil. Kim, your mind crafted such fantastic arts. And this piece just fit this time of the year. Superb!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 8:21 PM
Thank you, Fin!
Leiser Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 2:10 PM
Wow, Kim! What a wonderfully penned take on the betrayal of Joseph by his brothers. One can just feel his emotions as you describe his dilemma…and how God has a great, redeeming plan for him. Excellent poem! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 3:25 PM
Thank you so much, Laura!
Poet Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 7:34 PM
Evocative and creative, Kim. We all experience resentment sometimes, but as I read about your poem's beautiful ending and forgiving approach, I understood that anger never relates to something positive until there's a confluence of views.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 7:38 PM
Thank you, Lasaad, for your thoughtful comment!
Pandit Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 1:09 PM
Jealousy we encounter from time to time, but it never leads to anything productive unless there is the meeting of minds--as I read of the positive ending to your poem and a plan of reconciliation. Dreams come true, as you say.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 5:18 PM
Thank you, Vijay! :)
Callus Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 12:59 PM
I like the creative angle you give to this narrative, Kim. The coat of many colors has always appealed to me. A lesson to be learned here...to stay away from jealousy and favoritism. ~ Regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 5:18 PM
Thank you, Paul!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 12:13 PM
Isn't jealously green? Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Joseph’s brothers were jealous of him, true?
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