Roaming a Barren Desert

I roam this barren desert isolated with fear.
Solitary am I; neglected and left apart from 
those who used to love me. For I am but a 
lonely woman who bore a loss too deep.

This infertile oasis has given me nothing
but grief, and I notice I thirst for emerald
fields and cascading reveries to ease my
empty soul. I hear a “splish-splash” and
my yearning to be quenched by love has
overpowered my need to always be so
self-righteous and filled with selfish pride. 
my heart uninhabited; I am left dehydrated.

I used to believe in the comfort of passion;
now I am unaccompanied in this wasteland.
I only see ahead of me my pure desiccation. 
I am relinquished; I feel a fever with chills
running down my sweaty back and I no 
longer will be satisfied nor quelled in love. 

For I am wandering this forsaken desert
alone- renounced by the life I once knew.


Date written: October 13, 2018
SPonsor: Edward Ibeh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marcum Wong Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 4:30 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful first placement Laura! Superb! : )
Scars Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 10:13 AM
Thanks sweet Connie -luloo
Dutta Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 1:49 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win top. Love
Scars Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 10:12 AM
Many thanks sweet Anisha-luloo
Johnson Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 11:11 PM
Congrats. Great work.
Scars Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 10:11 AM
Thank you dear Curtis -luloo
Gondolf Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 6:49 PM
I could feel the emotions in this verse, LuLoo, nicely written. Congrats on your win. John
Scars Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 10:11 AM
Many thanks dear John -luloo
Gauthier Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 6:09 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win with this beautiful passionate write, Lu Loo.
Scars Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 10:11 AM
Thank you dear Line!-luloo
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