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Rivers Flow

Slowly Running water Gently washing each stone Flowing on down the river bed Blindly Searching Not knowing when this river ends Whether it’s straight or bends It will just flow In peace Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 09.20.2014

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Date: 10/20/2014 3:08:00 PM
Brienda my friend this is just lovely, and peaceful, I can image this scene as though I were standing outside seeing it for myself though your work in these lines, excellent visual, cheri
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Date: 9/20/2014 10:29:00 PM
HOw nice, that it will just flow in peace. What a great ending for this flowing river poem.
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Date: 9/20/2014 6:10:00 PM
Thank you Tim.
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Date: 9/20/2014 5:56:00 PM
Love this Brenda...it so mirrors life...hugs Tim
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Date: 9/20/2014 3:31:00 PM
Just beautiful in theme and form Brenda! Truly enjoyed it reading you some today. Have a great weekend! Love and light! xxx D.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/20/2014 6:09:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely complement Dorian.
Date: 9/20/2014 9:53:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Brenda:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/20/2014 2:16:00 PM
Thanks for your support Jan. XXOO

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