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Rivers Divide

Rivers Divide Walk with me thru sands of sorrow Talk with me thru sands of time Stay with me till the morrow Help me with my climb For * the * rivers * divide Cry with me in the lake of tears Caress my heart to ease the strain Embrace me to melt the fears Bathe with me to wash the pain For * the * rivers * divide Touch me until I wither away Kiss me until the Sun is swallowed Love me under the celestial bouquet To fill my Soul that is hollowed Sail with me my love the seven seas With eternity blowing in our breeze For * the * rivers * divide Music by the group DRACONIAN - 'Rivers Between Us' ...now look at what you've started Brandy lol Sept.10.2018 SEPTEMBER 2018 STANDARD,ANY FORM,ANY THEME Sponsored by: Brian Strand Placed 1'st

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Date: 9/14/2018 8:16:00 PM
Lovely, Winged Warrior. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win.
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Date: 9/14/2018 12:02:00 AM
Congratulations, WW on your fine win with a nicely flowing verse.
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Date: 9/13/2018 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations Winged Warrior, on this win. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. :) Brandy
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Date: 9/12/2018 3:49:00 PM
Very beautiful, WW, so peaceful and full of romantic imagery. Congrats on your win. Sandra
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Date: 9/12/2018 5:48:00 AM
Love it
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Date: 9/11/2018 6:52:00 AM
Great lines WW... Hope the light is shining..
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Date: 9/10/2018 7:15:00 PM
Just lovely :)
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Date: 9/10/2018 12:31:00 PM
Your verses are beautiful, Winged Warrior. The urgency of love is powerful, inspiring and wonderful!!!
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Date: 9/10/2018 11:20:00 AM
Breathtaking WW! Perhaps the love we all seek. You're amazing vocabulary and deep passionate knowledge combined to create some of the best poetry I have a read.
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Date: 9/10/2018 11:05:00 AM
Even when the rivers divide, moments subside- true love will always stay. I like the way your thoughts touch each other. This is beautiful, emotional and captivating. Once again you have created a masterpiece. ~ Brandy
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Date: 9/10/2018 9:19:00 AM
And the rivers do divide...Interesting...What will you do? All the best WW
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Date: 9/10/2018 9:12:00 AM
Nice one WW, really enjoyed this with good rhyme and flow. really speaks through all that it conveys. Have good day, Gordon
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