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River Wild

=================== She rages! Child of Rain and Stone... Stone, easing not the falls she takes, takes leave, that he might weep alone. Alone, he grieves until she wakes. Wakes held to mourn what Rain he'd known, known too, will push the River so, so, tiring of the moss he's grown, grown wild, she'll rise and let him go.... =================== =RIVER= Lycia Harding POEMS THAT DID NOT PLACE AND MORE Contest 09/05/2015

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Date: 9/19/2015 8:50:00 AM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/26/2015 4:11:00 AM
Thank you, Sara! xoxo
Date: 9/14/2015 1:32:00 PM
Lycia, congrats on placing in Nette's awesome contest. SKAT
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/14/2015 10:18:00 PM
Thank you, SKAT!
Date: 9/14/2015 5:00:00 AM
superb work, lycia... cold, hurt-- slivers of images on touch..thank you for joining my contest and sweet congrats!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/14/2015 9:34:00 PM
Thank you, Nette. If you'll notice, I used your 'Four Lines' format. I really like it, it's really challenging and the result is always very impactful. You've got to come up with a name for it!
Date: 9/14/2015 4:03:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Lycia!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/14/2015 10:18:00 PM
Thank you, Dr Sharma!
Date: 9/11/2015 1:07:00 PM
Lovely...not just rhyme, but you also used last word/first word scheme...very nice Lycia. Good luck! hugs!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/11/2015 4:52:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. I revised it a little. I think it flows better now...
Date: 9/8/2015 5:29:00 PM
the river of you....is what I try to sink into....with each read that I find....I am so captivated by your mind....;)
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/9/2015 1:57:00 PM
If I'm the river, you're the stone /==/ and though we flow here perfectly /==/ Stone sleeps in Rivers bed alone /==/ but helps her rock her poetry