River of Dreams

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undulating along endless valleys and mountains gleaming under the moonlight and cerulean sky cold air sings… estuary awaits in few miles ©2016Leonora Galinta All Rights Reserved Feb. 18, 2016 9.38pm - i wrote this verse the other night but was not able to enter in the contest right away because of internet problem.

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/12/2016 11:58:00 AM

Beautiful in the most unique way.. Loving this piece so much

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/21/2016 10:39:00 AM

Your wondering thoughts encompass the soul of a poet and bring to life the experience for others to ponder and enjoy. Emile.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/20/2016 3:01:00 AM

hello Darling SIS, I'm only taking a quick peek. I will not read the poem, for I have a feeling it's for my contest. haha, the title gave it away. Anyways, I feel bothered all of a sudden. But, I will tell you the next time you call me. Thanks for always being a true friend and sister... Always your BFF

Len Gasun
Date: 2/21/2016 8:09:00 AM

Thank you so much my dearest sis for stopping by. I know you read it.:)) and thank you so much also for being there for me always and forever my dearest friend, BFF and sis. God bless you.

Len Gasun
Date: 2/21/2016 7:55:00 AM

Hello my dearest sis! Is there something wrong? Btw, my poem means dreams keep on goin regardless how far it go, and if hassles make them cease, goal is still there... reachable and waiting. Hope you're doing well my loving sis. Just came back home. After church this morning, I went to dentist. My molar was removed at 2pm. Then went for massage to ease the pain. Ok..i'll call you.

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/20/2016 3:02:00 AM

Call me tomorrow if you have time. BFF