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River of Dream Flows

river of dream flows as water falls from mountains continuously heart's aspirations carry many nice sweet thoughts hypnotizes mildly good dream inspires all to go ahead in our life it bores no body For contest sponsored by: P.D.

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/21/2016 10:29:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku BL..

Bl Devnath
Date: 2/23/2016 4:10:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes, bl

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/21/2016 7:05:00 PM

Hi BL, congratulations on your 3rd place my friend, i enjoyed the read.

Bl Devnath
Date: 2/23/2016 4:10:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes, bl

Paul Callus

Date: 2/21/2016 2:48:00 PM

This is a lovely set of haiku/senryu, BLD. Flowing water and dreams go so well together. Congrats on your worthy win. // paul

Bl Devnath
Date: 2/21/2016 2:54:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes, bl

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/21/2016 2:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Bl Devnath
Date: 2/21/2016 2:22:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend,bl

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/21/2016 12:45:00 PM

Lovely, BL. Congratulations on your nice placement in the 'river of dreams' contest. Sandra

Bl Devnath
Date: 2/21/2016 1:01:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for wishing me congratulation,bl

Eve Roper

Date: 2/21/2016 11:20:00 AM

Great write, BL, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Bl Devnath
Date: 2/21/2016 1:01:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for wishing me congratulation,bl

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/21/2016 10:24:00 AM

Keeps everyone on their toes, that's for sure. In your first stanza I was imagining a waterfall. Congrats on the win!

Bl Devnath
Date: 2/21/2016 1:00:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes,bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2016 10:16:00 AM

WEll done, BL. BIG congrats in the contest.

Bl Devnath
Date: 2/21/2016 12:59:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for wishing me big congrats,bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 10:09:00 AM

BL,, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~

Bl Devnath
Date: 2/21/2016 12:58:00 PM

Thanks my *friend for wishing me congratulation. Loved always,bl