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River Analogy My Life - Before and After You

There lives a river Water never flows you came on the bank Threw a stone It became instill you enjoyed it It enjoyed it you got bored It was left abandoned It’s again the same river Water never flows

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/20/2016 6:32:00 AM

I love this piece so much. What a really hot newbie you are. Will be looking forward to more of this. A definite 7

Sharaj Panwar
Date: 5/21/2016 1:14:00 AM

Thank you so much mate. This is my personal favorite. I am glad you liked it and cared to encourage. :)

Skat A

Date: 4/25/2016 8:25:00 PM

sharaj panwar, you did well here. SKAT

Sharaj Panwar
Date: 4/29/2016 2:57:00 AM

SKAT thanks a lot for encouragement :)