River

Graceful torrent, where do you go
Till end of time, within oceans flow





For Brian Strand's contest

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Marty Owens

January 18, 2010 at 6:45 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contests...Love your poem...Marty

James Fraser

January 16, 2010 at 9:29 AM

Cecil, many congratulations on your win in Brian's fine contest >> James

Brandee Augustus

January 14, 2010 at 12:34 PM

Lovely and simple. I think these few words are a perfect description. Congratulations on your third place win!

Connie Marcum Wong

January 13, 2010 at 11:55 PM

How lovely this is Cecil. Congratulations! Connie

Andrea Dietrich

January 12, 2010 at 7:20 PM

congratulatons, Cecil, it was short but very powerful! andrea

Robert A. Dufresne

January 12, 2010 at 4:33 PM

Congratulations, Cecil on your win here with this crystalline!

Audrey Haick

January 12, 2010 at 9:30 AM

Excellent Crystalline, Cecil! Congratulations on your 3rd Place win in Brian's contest! Great job! Peace, Audrey

Carrie Richards

January 12, 2010 at 9:12 AM

Simply lovely! ~ Congratulations, Cecil!! ~ Carrie

Joyce Johnson

January 12, 2010 at 7:14 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest. Joyce

Elaine George

January 12, 2010 at 1:04 AM

Beautiful thought evoking crystalline, dear Cecil. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest and thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Love, Lainie

Brian Strand

January 12, 2010 at 12:26 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Cecil .Rgds Brian.My latest contest RHYME TIME is now open

Carolyn Devonshire

January 10, 2010 at 9:54 AM

Amazing crystalline, Cecil, filled with imagination and a great message as well. Good luck in Brian's contest, dear friend. Love you, Carolyn

James Fraser

January 9, 2010 at 9:47 AM

Your words flow just like the waters Cecil, good luck in Brian's contest >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 6, 2010 at 4:00 PM

This is both creative and a beautiful form of poetry .. good luck in Brian;s contest Cecil.. wonderful visuals ... very vivid.. my entry is Mysterious Waters.. about the Nile.. for the contest.. if u care to read... enjoyed ... blessings.. luv... Linda-Marie..

Andrea Dietrich

January 4, 2010 at 3:21 PM

A GREAT write. You said a lot in two lines. Good luck in the contest. Andrea

Audrey Haick

January 4, 2010 at 3:00 PM

Excellent Crystalline, Cecil! Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem. Peace, Audrey

Sara Kendrick

January 4, 2010 at 3:42 AM

Two lines that a person can go in many directions from faith based to ordinary life. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work for it was very encouraging. Sara

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

January 2, 2010 at 11:43 PM

Awesome! So simple, short, but a fabulous picture depicting its continuity. Good luck on Brian's contest. Love and blessings, Caroline.

Barbara Gorelick

January 2, 2010 at 8:31 PM

This goes to my favorites..so much can be said in this short form. BG

John Freeman

January 2, 2010 at 7:21 PM

Awesome Crystalline Cecil. Good luck in the contest. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 2, 2010 at 2:40 PM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Cecil. Please continue to write and share with us at PoetrySoup the whole year through. Thank you for all your kind comments. I wish you the best in the contest.Love, Carol