River

Graceful torrent, where do you go Till end of time, within oceans flow For Brian Strand's contest

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Marty Owens

Date: 1/18/2010 6:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contests...Love your poem...Marty

James Fraser

Date: 1/16/2010 9:29:00 AM

Cecil, many congratulations on your win in Brian's fine contest >> James

Brandee Augustus

Date: 1/14/2010 12:34:00 PM

Lovely and simple. I think these few words are a perfect description. Congratulations on your third place win!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/13/2010 11:55:00 PM

How lovely this is Cecil. Congratulations! Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2010 7:20:00 PM

congratulatons, Cecil, it was short but very powerful! andrea

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/12/2010 4:33:00 PM

Congratulations, Cecil on your win here with this crystalline!

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/12/2010 9:30:00 AM

Excellent Crystalline, Cecil! Congratulations on your 3rd Place win in Brian's contest! Great job! Peace, Audrey

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/12/2010 9:12:00 AM

Simply lovely! ~ Congratulations, Cecil!! ~ Carrie

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/12/2010 7:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest. Joyce

Elaine George

Date: 1/12/2010 1:04:00 AM

Beautiful thought evoking crystalline, dear Cecil. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest and thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Love, Lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 1/12/2010 12:26:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Cecil .Rgds Brian.My latest contest RHYME TIME is now open

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/10/2010 9:54:00 AM

Amazing crystalline, Cecil, filled with imagination and a great message as well. Good luck in Brian's contest, dear friend. Love you, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 1/9/2010 9:47:00 AM

Your words flow just like the waters Cecil, good luck in Brian's contest >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/6/2010 4:00:00 PM

This is both creative and a beautiful form of poetry .. good luck in Brian;s contest Cecil.. wonderful visuals ... very vivid.. my entry is Mysterious Waters.. about the Nile.. for the contest.. if u care to read... enjoyed ... blessings.. luv... Linda-Marie..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2010 3:21:00 PM

A GREAT write. You said a lot in two lines. Good luck in the contest. Andrea

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/4/2010 3:00:00 PM

Excellent Crystalline, Cecil! Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem. Peace, Audrey

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/4/2010 3:42:00 AM

Two lines that a person can go in many directions from faith based to ordinary life. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work for it was very encouraging. Sara

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 1/2/2010 11:43:00 PM

Awesome! So simple, short, but a fabulous picture depicting its continuity. Good luck on Brian's contest. Love and blessings, Caroline.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/2/2010 8:31:00 PM

This goes to my favorites..so much can be said in this short form. BG

John Freeman

Date: 1/2/2010 7:21:00 PM

Awesome Crystalline Cecil. Good luck in the contest. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/2/2010 2:40:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Cecil. Please continue to write and share with us at PoetrySoup the whole year through. Thank you for all your kind comments. I wish you the best in the contest.Love, Carol

Date: 1/2/2010 9:49:00 AM

What a peaceful thought. Much said in just two lines. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/2/2010 5:34:00 AM

very thought provoking muse. Keeps one ther a while. -Robert

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/2/2010 3:52:00 AM

Great work Cecil and best of luck in the contest. Till the end of time is definitely for sure...Raul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/2/2010 3:26:00 AM

Great write that should do well in the contest. Good luck. Keep the magical pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara