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September. 5.2023
H or R Pleiades Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Joseph May
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River, like silver strip Runs down from mountain slopes Rides through planes and dales Replenishing all lands Replete with nourishments Resonant with music Roaring and romancing.

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Date: 9/11/2023 1:46:00 AM
Oh what a movement your words are, especially; “ Roaring and romancing” Congratulations on your win ??
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Date: 9/9/2023 12:58:00 AM
I Love this Valsa each line flows into the next great pleiades indeed!
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Date: 9/8/2023 7:55:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on the well-deserved win dear, I absolutely love this pleiades! :)
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Date: 9/8/2023 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely Pleiades write. In the winter the ice is pretty down a mountain side. Have a fun day writing away..............
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Date: 9/8/2023 5:37:00 AM
Valsa, this is SO lovely and descriptive. CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Date: 9/8/2023 2:33:00 AM
Congratulations well deserved win this is.
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Date: 9/8/2023 1:54:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Valsa :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 9/7/2023 9:02:00 PM
What a gorgeous flowing piece and described this with beautiful movement and grace. You have characterised this so perfectly. Beautiful, Valsa.
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Date: 9/7/2023 5:40:00 PM
Valsa, your words paint a lovely picture! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 9/7/2023 3:53:00 PM
Congrats on your win Valsa, Very nicely penned
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Valsa George
Date: 9/8/2023 1:52:00 AM
Thank you so much dear friend Joseph for the placement given and opportunity allowed.
Date: 9/7/2023 3:46:00 AM
I love the emotions that you evoke in this poem. So well constructed. Best for a win. Blessings.
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Date: 9/7/2023 1:06:00 AM
Wow wow wow, what a breathtaking pleiades poem this is, definitely a magnificent take for the contest and truly one of my favs I've read so far! How gorgeously you've described the essence of rivers.. "Like silver strip" Absolutely love that! "Resonant with music", "roaring and romancing" I'm in awe of your R alliterative magic here and also, the way you've painted a fascinating imagery in front of the eyes.. This is magical~ :)
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Valsa George
Date: 9/7/2023 1:15:00 AM
With your comment my poem gets a rare sparkle. Clothed in ordinary words, it lacks the ornate splendor of your poetry. Still ypou make others feel that they are great poets. Thanks Hiya for the largesse of your heart.
Date: 9/6/2023 2:33:00 PM
Sticking to the plan. I haven't tried it yet but this gives me ideals.
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Date: 9/6/2023 10:16:00 AM
Nice penning Valsa. Your scenario description is vivid.
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Date: 9/6/2023 9:55:00 AM
I absolutely like your Pleiades poem, Valsa! It is truly enchanting, with the 'R' charm shining beautifully throughout. The way you choose to present the exploration of imagery and interpretations is unique and captivating, adding a touch of sweetness to the whole poem
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Date: 9/5/2023 7:45:00 PM
Amazing Valsa, every line an accurate fascinating fact. Your River Pleiades is wonderful. I love it.
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Date: 9/5/2023 3:35:00 PM
great write,river is alive and so beautiful, bravo poet
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Date: 9/5/2023 2:14:00 PM
Excellent sense! So much like our lives -- we ride down from the high of personal ego, to learn the lay of the land and its needs for selfless, spiritual nourishment. We are absorbed, hopefully to give back blossom, thus honoring our creator.
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Date: 9/5/2023 12:26:00 PM
The world must be singing to you, dear friend. I have noticed several references to music and song in you most recent poetic creations! Indeed your words resonate with romance, refreshment and life. Best wishes for the contest, dearest Valsa! Blessings of refreshment to you!
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Date: 9/5/2023 11:33:00 AM
May all have a drink from this river , beautiful poem, love it
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Date: 9/5/2023 10:38:00 AM
- "River, like silver strip Runs down from mountain slopes" ...a beautiful view and beautifully written, Valsa :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 9/5/2023 10:19:00 AM
Great Pleiades, Valsa, it ran smoothly and effectively from top to bottom. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 9/5/2023 9:44:00 AM
What an amazing pleiades, ah I absolutely love the imagery and how effortlessly and creatively youve written this in a very vivid manner: i can see those rivers running down mountain tops, and how melodious the sound of that would be: great word choices throughout, that fits R theme. You’ve nailed it. Goodluck for the contest
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