River

Oh what a movement your words are, especially; “ Roaring and romancing” Congratulations on your win ??

I Love this Valsa each line flows into the next great pleiades indeed!

Heartiest congratulations on the well-deserved win dear, I absolutely love this pleiades! :)

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely Pleiades write. In the winter the ice is pretty down a mountain side. Have a fun day writing away..............

Valsa, this is SO lovely and descriptive. CONGRATS on your win! Janice

Congratulations well deserved win this is.

- Congratulations on your win, Valsa :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

What a gorgeous flowing piece and described this with beautiful movement and grace. You have characterised this so perfectly. Beautiful, Valsa.

Valsa, your words paint a lovely picture! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Congrats on your win Valsa, Very nicely penned

I love the emotions that you evoke in this poem. So well constructed. Best for a win. Blessings.

Wow wow wow, what a breathtaking pleiades poem this is, definitely a magnificent take for the contest and truly one of my favs I've read so far! How gorgeously you've described the essence of rivers.. "Like silver strip" Absolutely love that! "Resonant with music", "roaring and romancing" I'm in awe of your R alliterative magic here and also, the way you've painted a fascinating imagery in front of the eyes.. This is magical~ :)

Sticking to the plan. I haven't tried it yet but this gives me ideals.

Nice penning Valsa. Your scenario description is vivid.

I absolutely like your Pleiades poem, Valsa! It is truly enchanting, with the 'R' charm shining beautifully throughout. The way you choose to present the exploration of imagery and interpretations is unique and captivating, adding a touch of sweetness to the whole poem

Amazing Valsa, every line an accurate fascinating fact. Your River Pleiades is wonderful. I love it.

great write,river is alive and so beautiful, bravo poet

Excellent sense! So much like our lives -- we ride down from the high of personal ego, to learn the lay of the land and its needs for selfless, spiritual nourishment. We are absorbed, hopefully to give back blossom, thus honoring our creator.

The world must be singing to you, dear friend. I have noticed several references to music and song in you most recent poetic creations! Indeed your words resonate with romance, refreshment and life. Best wishes for the contest, dearest Valsa! Blessings of refreshment to you!

May all have a drink from this river , beautiful poem, love it

- "River, like silver strip Runs down from mountain slopes" ...a beautiful view and beautifully written, Valsa :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Great Pleiades, Valsa, it ran smoothly and effectively from top to bottom. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Hugs, Bill

What an amazing pleiades, ah I absolutely love the imagery and how effortlessly and creatively youve written this in a very vivid manner: i can see those rivers running down mountain tops, and how melodious the sound of that would be: great word choices throughout, that fits R theme. You’ve nailed it. Goodluck for the contest