Riven

A small tornado passed on through
And split some neighbors’ trees in two.
The toppled pieces hit the ground
So branches scattered all around.

No harm was done to man or house
Thus it makes zero sense to grouse,
Though clean-up will be far from cheap
And losing trees could make one weep.

Still, Nature’s worthy of respect
For so much strength, yet I suspect
Her power will not be forgiven
By those whose trees were wrongly riven.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 10:06 PM
I am with Leslie on this one. I have never heard the word 'riven' before in my life. I am looking it up now. I like learning new words!
Johnson Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 4:51 PM
Yay, I learned yet another new word from you ilene. And well used too I might add. :) btw, not that I think I have to say, but the word is riven. :) I feel like Allen Ludden on password. And the word is. :)
Wolf Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 9:22 PM
I agree, Ilene. Unless the homeowner is a saint, Nature will not be forgiven. :) gw
Leffanta Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 8:54 PM
Another masterpiece! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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