Rituals

Rituals

in the summer rain
we dance like silk winged mayflies
our skirts bright with water
the fields ripen

the soft dunes hiss
with the scraping of bone fragments
ancients are sleeping
on pillows of wind.
.
in the summer rain
our feet move on the soft earth
leaving paths of laughter
the crops reach up.

the grandmothers
traced coloured scraps of wool
through their weaving
to save our stories.

in the summer rain
our hands reach beyond the horizon
we touch the gods
to thank them for life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/2/2017 5:29:00 PM
Oh YES,Patricia. Halleluia !
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/2/2017 5:33:00 PM
LOL you are into the spirit of the poem thank you for your comment.
Date: 10/29/2017 7:47:00 PM
I really enjoy your poems that have a ritualistic theme associated with them, I suppose it is that Native Indian influence being brought to bear once more...lovely writing! :) john
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/31/2017 11:43:00 AM
It is more the way women have always shown their devotion to a diety in thanks or others for different reasons. think of dinner at your mums or birthdays etc.. women always make some sort of ritual. I love that about us.
Date: 10/28/2017 6:37:00 PM
Beautiful, Patricia!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/28/2017 8:44:00 PM
Thank you Sunny One.
Date: 10/28/2017 7:54:00 AM
I'll dance with you! Gorgeous pen love xomo!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/28/2017 9:03:00 AM
Yes that would be magnificent! Thank you.
Date: 10/28/2017 3:39:00 AM
Oh, I love this! Beautiful, magical. So glad I found this!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/28/2017 9:05:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem.
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