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Rituals

Rituals in the summer rain we dance like silk winged mayflies our skirts bright with water the fields ripen the soft dunes hiss with the scraping of bone fragments ancients are sleeping on pillows of wind. . in the summer rain our feet move on the soft earth leaving paths of laughter the crops reach up. the grandmothers traced coloured scraps of wool through their weaving to save our stories. in the summer rain our hands reach beyond the horizon we touch the gods to thank them for life.

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Date: 11/2/2017 5:29:00 PM
Oh YES,Patricia. Halleluia !
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/2/2017 5:33:00 PM
LOL you are into the spirit of the poem thank you for your comment.
Date: 10/29/2017 7:47:00 PM
I really enjoy your poems that have a ritualistic theme associated with them, I suppose it is that Native Indian influence being brought to bear once more...lovely writing! :) john
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/31/2017 11:43:00 AM
It is more the way women have always shown their devotion to a diety in thanks or others for different reasons. think of dinner at your mums or birthdays etc.. women always make some sort of ritual. I love that about us.
Date: 10/28/2017 6:37:00 PM
Beautiful, Patricia!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/28/2017 8:44:00 PM
Thank you Sunny One.
Date: 10/28/2017 7:54:00 AM
I'll dance with you! Gorgeous pen love xomo!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/28/2017 9:03:00 AM
Yes that would be magnificent! Thank you.
Date: 10/28/2017 3:39:00 AM
Oh, I love this! Beautiful, magical. So glad I found this!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/28/2017 9:05:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem.

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