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Ritual

On both sides of drunk and on both sides of sober, both sides of the truth and both sides a lie lie the two of us. You own the license to my pain, I hold the leasehold to your wounds, we hunger for the ritual embedded in our souls, contusions that won't heal. We can't breathe but what we're bleeding, leeching out the worst of how we feel.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/14/2009 7:10:00 AM
This poem is so raw! Absolutely overflowing with venom! That horrible "can't live with, can't live without" situation. You know I adore Plath and I know for sure she would be smiling that melancholic smile of hers whilst reading and fully consuming this. Absolutely amazing work here. Nathaniel
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Date: 4/13/2009 3:58:00 PM
clearly you understand the inescapeable problem. but the fact is it IS escapeable. your friend John H Loving III
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Date: 4/13/2009 3:11:00 PM
Wow...this is raw with honest emotion!! Well done! ~ Carrie
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Date: 4/13/2009 12:24:00 PM
Beautiful.
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