Ritual

On both sides of drunk
and on both sides of sober,
both sides of the truth
and both sides a lie 
lie the two of us.

You own the license to my pain,
I hold the leasehold to your wounds,
we hunger for the ritual       
embedded in our souls,
contusions that won't heal.

We can't breathe 
but what we're bleeding, 
leeching out the worst 
of how we feel.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Köhp Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 7:10 AM
This poem is so raw! Absolutely overflowing with venom! That horrible "can't live with, can't live without" situation. You know I adore Plath and I know for sure she would be smiling that melancholic smile of hers whilst reading and fully consuming this. Absolutely amazing work here. Nathaniel
Loving Iii Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 3:58 PM
clearly you understand the inescapeable problem. but the fact is it IS escapeable. your friend John H Loving III
Richards Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 3:11 PM
Wow...this is raw with honest emotion!! Well done! ~ Carrie
Shahwan Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 12:24 PM
Beautiful.
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