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Risque : Reloaded :

useless she goaded 
                  his libido eroded 
                 feeling outmoded 
        two blue pills locked and loaded 
         you beast ~ payload exploded


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David Kavanagh

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Karen Jones

October 21, 2021 at 12:46 PM

lol made me giggle fun read

David Kavanagh

October 21, 2021 at 1:00 PM

Thanks Karen, all the poetesses seem to be enjoying this one, cheers David

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

October 21, 2021 at 10:59 AM

Sublime and sassy lol! Kudos! <<<<<<<<>>>>>>•^^^^^ Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

David Kavanagh

October 21, 2021 at 12:18 PM

Thank you Zaynab, I appreciate your calling in, Your poem is wonderful cheers David

Jennifer Proxenos

October 21, 2021 at 10:46 AM

Hi David, i'll let the boys answer this but what can I say, I read it and had a good laugh. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

David Kavanagh

October 21, 2021 at 12:07 PM

Heya Jennifer Most boys would never admit using the blue pill, so probably won't get many takers on this one lol, This actually started out as a senryu, but wasn't working so the extra bit the tanka allows worked fine, a bit like oops I've said enough, cheers David