Barbara Gorelick Poet Limerick

Risky Whiskey

Our Paddy had a strong liking for whiskey
When under its influence he got a bit frisky
Didn't think he was able
But impregnated Mable
A reminder that his kind of behavior is risky




Mark Twain-Sometimes to much drink is barely enough

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Sara Kendrick July 25, 2015 at 2:33 PM Perfection indeed…Way to go with this win..Congrats!!Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 22, 2015 at 3:12 AM Brilliant write Barbara! Congrats on a superb win!

Kim Merryman July 20, 2015 at 10:01 PM Oops! Funny write, Barbara! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

David Fisher July 19, 2015 at 7:16 PM This is a funny one, Barbara! Usually they take away 'his key' with too much whiskey. Way to go on the contest. Barbara Gorelick July 20, 2015 at 10:49 AM Thanks for stopping by..appreciate it..BG

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2015 at 3:18 PM Loved the naughty humor here. If you had the meter better, this could have been a top winner! Truly funny. Congrats in my contest.

Skat A July 19, 2015 at 2:35 PM Barbara, Congratulations on your awesome win... LOVE SKAT

Viv Wigley July 19, 2015 at 1:49 PM Great little Limerick, Barbara, and good choice of quote. Congratulations, Viv x

Ralph Sergi July 19, 2015 at 1:13 PM A word to the wise and drunks. Great Poem! Congrats on your win.

Jan Allison July 19, 2015 at 1:11 PM oh this is priceless lol congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless June 23, 2015 at 6:24 AM It has been said "when whiskey's on - wits gone".

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2015 at 4:07 PM Sounds like Mable may not have been his wife?! This is funny, Barbara. I just had to see one with a title like this.

Casarah Nance June 22, 2015 at 1:31 PM I really like the title! Nice limerick :)