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Risk

I'm way up high
I've seen it all
I've been there far too often
  
l can hear my fears
the gambles real
but chance of harm is falling

I'm scared as hell
I'm surging down
I'm drowning in the sea

The dangers near
the loss is far
but harm is just a feeling

The beginning stopped
l wont let go
my love for you is needing
 
l have no choice
I'll take the risk
as love from you is leaving.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/23/2017 1:40:00 PM
Lovely poem. But I made a few observations: The word gambles I think ought to be gamble is I see apostrophe is lost in word- wont (won't),
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/23/2017 2:03:00 PM
Thank you for your comment. I'm afraid there are grammar mistakes in all my poems :( take care. Jackie

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