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Risk

I'm way up high I've seen it all I've been there far too often l can hear my fears the gambles real but chance of harm is falling I'm scared as hell I'm surging down I'm drowning in the sea The dangers near the loss is far but harm is just a feeling The beginning stopped l wont let go my love for you is needing l have no choice I'll take the risk as love from you is leaving.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/23/2017 1:40:00 PM
Lovely poem. But I made a few observations: The word gambles I think ought to be gamble is I see apostrophe is lost in word- wont (won't),
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Jackie Elston
Date: 7/23/2017 2:03:00 PM
Thank you for your comment. I'm afraid there are grammar mistakes in all my poems :( take care. Jackie

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