Rising Star

 dawn kisses the sky
 with golden colors
  our star is rising
 brightening the day

naturejueju

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/1/2024 7:07:00 AM

- A beautiful poem, Joseph :) - I love looking at the stars :) - hugs

Constance La France

Date: 11/13/2024 12:02:00 PM

Joseph, congrats on your win in my contest, like your poem, well done, blessings Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/20/2024 7:17:00 AM

I have read your work and am delighted to see it on the winner's list. Congratulations. Way to go. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/17/2024 10:43:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Rising Star" write again. This week this a pretty full moon... Have a wonderful day with your win..................

thriveni c mysore

Date: 10/11/2024 10:50:00 PM

creative write. congratulations on your win dear poet.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/7/2024 12:21:00 PM

Hi Joseph what an awesome poem and how beautifully creative is this jeuju - what a delightful Rising Star you are my friend. Blessings Jennifer.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/7/2024 6:51:00 AM

lovely. love it. God bless you always, love, Gina

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2024 4:22:00 PM

Very cool and as succinct as you can be with this form. I needed to use 7 syllables per line. I like how it allows either 5 or 7

Ink Empress

Date: 10/5/2024 12:28:00 AM

I absolutely love the opening line dear Joseph! So romantic and beautiful! And the way youv painted imagery in such a seamless manner in this is truly soul warming for the heart of the the reader. Well woven and delivered.” Our star is rising” can feel hope and faith there too. Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light always

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/4/2024 12:13:00 PM

A prophetic poem that I hope comes true. Good luck (rising).

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 10/4/2024 7:15:00 AM

Hello Joe, A great scene in the morning, especially now that fall has settled in. Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/2/2024 9:38:00 AM

Love your beautiful "Rising Star" write. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away...............

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/2/2024 9:36:00 AM

…with golden colors…so pretty, Joe!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/2/2024 8:43:00 AM

This jueju is so compact and marvellously constructed.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/2/2024 7:30:00 AM

Oh wowww what a magical and inspiring jueju this is! It's quite a restricted poetry form with limited syllables and punctuation rules but you've nailed this in every way, whilst painting an ethereal imagery with your creative words ~ I absolutely adore this line "dawn kisses the sky with golden colors" And the star finally rises, breathing life upon earth.. So beautiful, loved reading this...

Rising Star

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