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Rising of Dove

Rainbow roses revived Rainbow rains rising Rising of ruby rituals Rising from heartbeat of lies Lies with opal wings Lies betray every crown Crown of the spiritual realm Crown of a forbidden Queen Queen reigning with clemency Queen who thrones destiny Destiny is an inkless rhyme Destiny is a slave of time Time weaves a vault of woes Time is an eclipse of fingers Fingers tied in inflicted foes Fingers script sagas untold Sagas immortal Sagas unfurling a sanctuary Sanctuary of secrecy Sanctuary of forlorn mists Mists float in lunar memories Mists I breathe Breathe in hope Breathe in mystery Mystery hides in midnight Mystery of masked twilight Twilight voices silence Twilight swinging on tears Tears of honeysuckle sun Tears homing fears Fears of illusions Fears forge fatal seclusions Seclusion of fertile faith Seclusion of lachrymose lilies Lilies lethally fragrant Lilies bloom in death Death rebirths a phoenix Death is a wizard Wizard of resilience Wizard of soul Soul is untamable Soul is a swan of liberty Liberty of love Liberty of heart Heart sings in passion Heart is a daisy dove, Dove echoing an empyrean legacy Dove admiring the cherry moon Moon... Legacy...

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/18/2024 4:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go! Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

Howard Kerr

Date: 2/17/2024 6:57:00 PM

Hiya, I’m absolutely delighted for you. Congratulations on your medal winning podium placement with this stylish blitz poem. Howard

I Am Anaya

Date: 2/17/2024 12:59:00 PM

The Blitz took me away to an enchanted place, I Love this "Soul is a swan of liberty Liberty of love Liberty of heart" wow! Congratulations on your win Hiya! ;)

Hiya Sharma
Date: 2/17/2024 8:31:00 PM

Awwn, thank you so much beautiful Anaya, I was kinda nervous about this one as it's my first ever blitz, but really elated that you enjoyed reading this. Sending lots of love and light your way :)

Silent One

Date: 2/17/2024 11:14:00 AM

Well done on your Blitz, I felt some of your verses did not flow as well as the others, otherwise it would have finished higher... well done on doing the from correctly though.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Hiya Sharma
Date: 2/17/2024 8:29:00 PM

Oh, thank you so much for kindly placing my blitz in your contest, dear Silent One.. I'm glad that I could do the form correctly, as it's my first ever blitz lol!! Still learning and will try to improve the flow, it was an inspiring prompt.. Enjoyed participating.

Howard Kerr

Date: 2/12/2024 12:55:00 AM

Hiya, You are the quintessential virtuoso of vivid vibrant portraits, the ultimate unique scene setter. Images both refulgent and radiant whilst conveying thoughts imbued with deep insight sustain the reader. A glittering picture emerges from your superior craft. The very best of luck with this. I cherish your complementary slant on my Blitz Warm wishes Howard

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2024 11:34:00 PM

Another awesome blitz poem here. Gorgeous images, Hiya

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/6/2024 10:23:00 AM

Dear Hiya, your poem is truly magnificent. It captivated me with its beautiful construction. The way you brought this form of poetry together is simply mesmerizing. I appreciate you sharing your incredible gift with us all. Your words have been wonderfully woven together, creating a symphony of emotions. Each line showcases your creativity and carefully chosen language.

Howard Kerr

Date: 2/6/2024 7:56:00 AM

Hiya, Imaginative, intelligent, imposing, incisive, are among the superlatives I would choose for this wondrous cascade of a heavenly picturesque piece. It never wavers, wobbles or strays from its sublime subject matter. “Seclusion of lachrymose lilies,” “Tears of honeysuckle sun,” “ Death rebirths a phoenix,” are among the many illustrious lines. Congratulations on success Ink Empress contest. Your complements on my recent post I will cherish forever Many thanks Howard

Paige Hind

Date: 2/5/2024 4:30:00 PM

Wow- this is the most beautiful blitz I've read yet. Beautiful.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/5/2024 9:27:00 AM

Delightful. Pity you missed my dragonfly.

Valsa George

Date: 2/5/2024 5:46:00 AM

Hats off dear gifted poetess. You keep amazing me with the flow of images and word power. You are well versed in every poetic poem.... !" Heart sings in passion Heart is a daisy dove, Dove echoing an empyrean legacy".... Keep singing my friend like a dove... ! Fly high, singing "in full throated ease" !

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/4/2024 10:04:00 PM

An absolutely beautiful creation, Hiya! I loved 'Tears of honeysuckle sun,' among so many other lines. This is a fave. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/4/2024 3:31:00 PM

Hello Hiya, I enjoyed this poem about the doves, my fav. bird. I like the way the words flow together. Hugs. /Darlene/

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/4/2024 12:15:00 PM

Sentences interlocking in an interesting fortress of events, poem glows with perfection. The blitz style looks difficult, but you achieved a victory.

Joseph May

Date: 2/4/2024 11:48:00 AM

"Destiny is an inkless rhyme", Very nicely penned Hiya

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/4/2024 4:04:00 AM

Creative and descriptive Blitz. Way to go. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

Bill Baker

Date: 2/3/2024 10:48:00 PM

This is a fun form to read poetry in, Hiya. You seek very good at this form of poetry. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your enjoyable poetry. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/3/2024 5:15:00 PM

your poem was captivating and so beautifully constructed, dear Hiya. These lines captured my attention: Lilies lethally fragrant Lilies bloom in death...lilies bloom in death that's powerful stuff. A lot of depth and brilliant creativity to your poem. The Blitz looks challenging but you made it look easy :-) Best wishes with the contest, Sara

Tom Woody

Date: 2/3/2024 4:30:00 PM

Hello Hiya! Sorry I've been absent a bit. Awesome blitz. By far my fave line is: Dove admiring a cherry moon. Have a great Sunday

Stephan McBride

Date: 2/3/2024 4:03:00 PM

Beautiful, this form of poetry is so captivating, love how brought this together, thanks for sharing your beautiful gift with us all: )

I Am Anaya

Date: 2/3/2024 1:43:00 PM

Hiya, this is amazing, and you made me realize that I did the blitz wrong, fixed now! I'm so sorry I missed your comment on my calendar poem. Please write all about your mother's birthday as it happens. I love,"Sagas immortal Sagas unfurling a sanctuary Sanctuary of secrecy Sanctuary of forlorn mists" intriguing! Great contendar! xo

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/3/2024 12:22:00 PM

Like a basket woven up. words linked to make it a whole. Best for the contest,

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/3/2024 8:56:00 AM

Wonderfully woven in symphony of emotions. Each line progressively dwells in motifs of your creativity and diction, Hiya.--Destiny is an inkless rhyme Destiny is a slave of time--Mystery of masked twilight Twilight voices silence --Heart sings in passion Heart is a daisy dove-- Excellent, as always!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/3/2024 8:51:00 AM

When I see a dove, I think of peace and the peace movement. So, I read this thinking about peace and what a difficult climb it is to make it to where we want to be--almost to the realm of the impossible. You are so smart and inciteful.

Ink Empress

Date: 2/3/2024 8:11:00 AM

Ah my angelic barbie star, this is absolutely magical! A blitz that glistens from miles and makes me go wow! The way youv phrased throughout this blitz is beyond captivating and impeccable and it flows really well too. For your first ever blitz, i must say youv nailed it. You are a quick learner and you pick up so well on anything or any form of poetry you do and just excel with your poetic prowess! I love so many lines in this especially . “ Time weaves a vault of woes Time..” how deep is that

Ink Empress
Date: 2/3/2024 8:14:00 AM

“ Soul is a swan of liberty Liberty of love” the alliterations and your way of pairing words creating metaphors so divine and enchanting while also expressing is what makes your lines stand out and I absolutely love the ending lines! So good! Ah! Ofcours our moon is there. And this time it is a cherry one and i cant help but love that! So deep! Brilliant! Best wishes for the contest! Im sure silent one will appreciate this