Sara Kendrick Poet Cinquain

Rising Early

Housewife
Rises early
Before sun cooks breakfast
Graciously cares for family
Servant

Thanks David Williams for contest
The Three H's 
Theme chosen: Housewives
Form:Traditional Cinquain
June 2, 2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 14, 2012 at 12:12 PM Congratulations on your win in David's "Hero's & Heroine's" contest Sara. Love, Carol

David Williams June 13, 2012 at 1:33 AM Sara, yours was the only Cinquain, and it just said it all in very few words.....David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl June 13, 2012 at 1:08 AM oh this is sad when you lf look into it Sara we must be worth more than the title of servant. Congratulations xx

Andrea Dietrich June 12, 2012 at 9:01 PM So short but so well crafted! Congrats on your win!

Nette Onclaud June 12, 2012 at 8:45 PM special cheers to you for this super win, sara,including the many others..:) huggs!

Debbie Guzzi June 12, 2012 at 7:14 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Michelle Mac Donald June 4, 2012 at 5:51 PM Hey Sara! Maybe a "Servant", but I'm sure one who is loved and appreciated.:) Would bring morning smiles to the family! Best wishes, love, Mikki

Joe Maverick June 4, 2012 at 12:44 PM This makes you wonder who the servant truly is Sara.."maybe there are two servants there? quite a thoughtful write you have penned here..)

Matthew Anish June 3, 2012 at 6:29 PM It is a nice poem - but one I think feminists sould not like. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jancarl Campi June 3, 2012 at 4:58 AM This is a delightful write. Just goes to show that a woman's work is never done. Jancarl

Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2012 at 4:59 PM - "A good old-fashioned housewife" - :) - Wish you luck in contest Sara! - Well done! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Andrea Dietrich June 2, 2012 at 4:01 PM nicely done cinquain, Sara. I am confused now how the contest will proceed whether as heroes or the 3 H's theme. Mine doesn't quite fit as heroines! Good luck to you. I think yours fits also as heroine.

Lucilla Carrillo June 2, 2012 at 3:15 PM Good write, I used to be one of those. I still get up early, but I don't have to cook anymore. Many blessings. Lucilla

Jack Horne June 2, 2012 at 9:10 AM lol, yes, I suppose many housewives do feel like servants, Sara. Enjoyed this witty write

Russell Sivey June 2, 2012 at 8:41 AM Maybe in years past this was the norm, but anymore the typical housewife isn't that typical anymore! This is a very nicely written write my friend! I really enjoyed this fantastic and marvelous poem! Great Work!!

Ilene Bauer June 2, 2012 at 7:36 AM true in many households (not mine!) and very nicely said!

Pace Ink-U-Script June 2, 2012 at 6:16 AM Excellent write here as usual Sara!!! Hugs