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Rising Early

Housewife Rises early Before sun cooks breakfast Graciously cares for family Servant Thanks David Williams for contest The Three H's Theme chosen: Housewives Form:Traditional Cinquain June 2, 2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/14/2012 12:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in David's "Hero's & Heroine's" contest Sara. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 6/13/2012 1:33:00 AM

Sara, yours was the only Cinquain, and it just said it all in very few words.....David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/13/2012 1:08:00 AM

oh this is sad when you lf look into it Sara we must be worth more than the title of servant. Congratulations xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2012 9:01:00 PM

So short but so well crafted! Congrats on your win!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/12/2012 8:45:00 PM

special cheers to you for this super win, sara,including the many others..:) huggs!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/12/2012 7:14:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/4/2012 5:51:00 PM

Hey Sara! Maybe a "Servant", but I'm sure one who is loved and appreciated.:) Would bring morning smiles to the family! Best wishes, love, Mikki

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/4/2012 12:44:00 PM

This makes you wonder who the servant truly is Sara.."maybe there are two servants there? quite a thoughtful write you have penned here..)

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/3/2012 6:29:00 PM

It is a nice poem - but one I think feminists sould not like. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jancarl Campi

Date: 6/3/2012 4:58:00 AM

This is a delightful write. Just goes to show that a woman's work is never done. Jancarl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/2/2012 4:59:00 PM

- "A good old-fashioned housewife" - :) - Wish you luck in contest Sara! - Well done! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2012 4:01:00 PM

nicely done cinquain, Sara. I am confused now how the contest will proceed whether as heroes or the 3 H's theme. Mine doesn't quite fit as heroines! Good luck to you. I think yours fits also as heroine.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/2/2012 3:15:00 PM

Good write, I used to be one of those. I still get up early, but I don't have to cook anymore. Many blessings. Lucilla

Jack Horne

Date: 6/2/2012 9:10:00 AM

lol, yes, I suppose many housewives do feel like servants, Sara. Enjoyed this witty write

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/2/2012 8:41:00 AM

Maybe in years past this was the norm, but anymore the typical housewife isn't that typical anymore! This is a very nicely written write my friend! I really enjoyed this fantastic and marvelous poem! Great Work!!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/2/2012 7:36:00 AM

true in many households (not mine!) and very nicely said!

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/2/2012 6:16:00 AM

Excellent write here as usual Sara!!! Hugs