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Robert J. Lindley and Lawrence Sharp collaboration
12-06-2018

Note: Yet again my dear friend, I have been fortunate enough to be blessed by writing with you. Your verses are jewels in a treasure chest that warm this old poet's heart. I thank you for your great kindness, your inspiration given me, and your immense poetic talents that so shine and give to others.
This is our fifth collaboration and each one has been a true joy and great pleasure to compose with such a wonderful friend and kind soul. 
God bless, you and yours...

Rise At Dawn's Soft Spoken And Eager Sun's Reprieve Let forests pure and pristine, live to give great hope that man can see true Light beyond his darkened scope Nature gifts us beautiful truths and savage scenes despite we wanting blue skies, meadows verdant greens, far from heat of concrete slabs and long city streets one may traverse wherein soul and mother earth meets; walk paths of reality and seek deeper peace, and from his man-made jungle find a sweet release; unto peaceful valleys and clear flowing soft dreams a lost soul reborn, with peace and calm that redeems. Let forests pure and pristine, live to give great hope That man can see true Light, beyond his darkened scope To know truth diligently search its hidden spots untouched by man, with destructive hand that sends rot, Rise at dawn's soft spoken and eager sun's reprieve find those awesome scenes that aching heart so relieves; as eyes feast on magic colors and singing birds, such that are far, far more beautiful than mere words; finding paradise within this realm too oft dark, walking through flower-meadow scenes, hear singing lark. Let forests pure and pristine, live to give great hope that man can see true Light beyond his darkened scope Give no credence to the malevolent tower whose gift is withheld to preserve its own power, but walk naked and alone and empty-handed away from the contest where once you were stranded; under sunlight’s true might and in rain’s true embrace stand on earth that is yours with the wind in your face; now look with new eyes to the new gods that should be, for before us they were, and are within the tree. Let forests pure and pristine, live to give great hope That man can see true Light, beyond his darkened scope Now lie face down in the grass, but count not one blade, dwell not in the chambers where your nerves were first frayed, count not the false cost of greenest truth on your skin, but give in to its caress most longed for within; the leaves and the bark and the benevolent rain, the soil, once so pure, and your spirit, once so plain; free of and beyond luxurious prison walls the gloom may be lifted as Mammon’s sceptre falls. Let forests pure and pristine, live to give great hope That man can see true Light, beyond his darkened scope Robert J. Lindley and Lawrence Sharp collaboration 12-06-2018 Note: Yet again my dear friend, I have been fortunate enough to be blessed by writing with you. Your verses are jewels in a treasure chest that warm this old poet's heart. I thank you for your great kindness, your inspiration given me, and your immense poetic talents that so shine and give to others. This is our fifth collaboration and each one has been a true joy and great pleasure to compose with such a wonderful friend and kind soul. God bless, you and yours...

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Date: 12/18/2018 8:23:00 PM
Hi Robert, such a beautiful and uplifting sonnet you both have collaborated on. Your two pens become one in a seamless write that fills me with emotion. Pure gold that sings to my soul, your words paint your canvas with such wonderful imagery. A collaboration to make the heart sing. Another excellent write from you both. A fave. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....mike.
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Date: 12/9/2018 6:39:00 AM
Hi Robert, You and Lawerence write well together. It was a great blend of two poetic voices coming together as one. I found it to be a well written nature write that was deep and thought provoking.Excellent job my friend. PS, you come up great titles that get the reader's attention instantly:-) Alexis
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Robert Lindley
Date: 12/9/2018 10:32:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend, Lawrence and I both took great care in editing and finishing the poem and its message given to its readers. I am very blessed to have such an immensely talented co-writer to keep me on the straight and narrow path. As my flights of fantasy oft led me far afield.
Date: 12/8/2018 11:21:00 AM
Robert, so beautifully penned by both you and Lawrence, full of lovely imagery and your faith shines bright , well done
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Date: 12/8/2018 12:50:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend, Lawrence and I both enjoy doing these collaborations and I learn more each time we do one. Pleased that you liked this collaboration and saw merit in its message we have striven mightily and hope so dearly that we have so delivered...
Date: 12/7/2018 10:12:00 AM
Your poem is a beautiful glimpse into nature's wonders and the connection of the Creator and his creation. Well done Robert and Lawrence.
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Date: 12/7/2018 5:06:00 PM
Thank you my good friend. My great writing partner Lawrence keeps me on my toes trying to stay up with him and his rich and golden verses.
Date: 12/6/2018 12:05:00 PM
Pure poetry Robert and Lawrence and a beautiful collaboration. Your pens write so well together. Tom.
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Date: 12/7/2018 7:10:00 AM
Tom , my great friend, your very kind and thoughtful words are always greatly and immensely appreciated. Lawrence ans I both, enjoy deeply writing these poems and doing so in good fellowship, and without envy, rivalry or our giving any obedience to that green-eyed monster so prevalent in the Arts today. God bless......
Date: 12/6/2018 10:52:00 AM
The magnificent spirit of this poem speaks to my heart, ignites my imagination and moves my soul, Robert. A brilliant and inspiring collaboration with Lawrence. The potent magic of your combined pens casts a spellbinding beauty of deep and meaningful poetry in finding roots of true appreciation within Nature, but especially, within one's natural self. A gorgeous collaborative gem that sparkles with emotions and with your mighty talents, Robert and Lawrence. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/7/2018 7:07:00 AM
Susan my wonderful and very dear friend. I am so glad that you found this our collaboration to be worthy of such sincere and thoughtful praise. I myself, give my immensely talented writing partner greater credit and I am always in awe of his magnificent verses that truly increase the beauty, color, depth and meaningful message in each poem that we in sincere respect and friendship compose together. God bless...
Date: 12/6/2018 10:35:00 AM
You are a master of rhymes, Robert. Charming message in your poem..so delightful and uplifting write..superbly done. Kudos to you, both.
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Date: 12/7/2018 7:01:00 AM
Vijay my great friend. Thank you always for your support and your reading and replying with such thoughtful and kind words. Your heart and soul are in tune with kindness, poetry and love of this great art that we all dabble in to the very best of our poetic abilities. God bless..
Date: 12/6/2018 10:28:00 AM
For a fifth time, Robert, your magnificent pen has inspired a collaborative write that leaves me greatly honoured and filled with wonder. Thank you for the ongoing fellowship and inspiration. You are a true gift to any who read you, and even more so to any fortunate enough to write with you. Blessings, my friend.
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Date: 12/7/2018 6:59:00 AM
Lawrence my dear friend, it is I that must thank you - for your great kindness, honorable character, blessed friendship, support, and joining with me in comradeship and composing of our joint poetry collaborations. For your immensely creative poetic talents and your sharing your time and writing together with me. God bless...l

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