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Smoke ring of clouds float around A mountain top can be found Strength to be seen in the sky Gathering thoughts, that climb high Rise! Rise! It is a new day! To reach those dreams from last night Follow the clouds on your way Before they are out of sight Heidi Sands 5/26/18 Placed 3rd in the Eight Lines poetry Contest. Sponsor: Joseph May

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Eve Roper
Date: 6/5/2018 11:01:00 AM
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An artist eye sees the imagery in nature,Heidi, great rhyme and flow of the verse. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2018 11:32:00 AM
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That is true Eve about the artist's eye. Thank you :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/5/2018 2:35:00 AM
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Congratulations, Heidi. Yes mountains are wonderful.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2018 11:32:00 AM
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Thank you Subimal :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 6/4/2018 10:40:00 AM
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Heidi, congrats on your win for this beautiful poem. John
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/4/2018 10:58:00 AM
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Thank you so much John :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/4/2018 6:20:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win with this beautiful inspirational poem of nature. Well done! I enjoyed reading it. Refreshing!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/4/2018 7:17:00 AM
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Thank you Susan. I am happy to hear you enjoyed it :)
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Carrie Richards
Date: 6/3/2018 8:56:00 PM
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This is wonderful ! Reminds me of Mt. Shasta that I can see from my front porch! so I can relate to the description!! Well done, Heidi !
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/4/2018 7:16:00 AM
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Thank you Carrie. That is wonderful you can see Mt. Shasta from your front porch! :)
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Joseph May
Date: 6/3/2018 7:22:00 PM
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"Rising to meet dreams before they float away".. Congrats on your win Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/4/2018 7:16:00 AM
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Thank you Joseph. I appreciate the opportunity to be in your contest :)
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 5/28/2018 4:34:00 AM
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This is marvelous! (= Such a lovely poem with genuine lines. -JWE
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2018 7:40:00 AM
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Thank you JW :)
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/26/2018 9:30:00 PM
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I second Vijay, a beautiful read!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/27/2018 6:55:00 AM
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Thank you Mick :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/26/2018 4:02:00 PM
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Excellent entry for the contest..you write so fast ..at the speed of a creative mind..well crafted. A TOP win Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/26/2018 4:20:00 PM
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Thank you Vijay. I appreciate you comments and support always :)

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