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Ripples of Love-Cinqku

Ripples, of my love thru stormy seas will reach the shores of your, heaven. Cinqku follows a strict 17 syllable count arranged in five successive lines of 2-3-4-6-2 syllables. Sept.11.2018 Son of a Senryu Poetry Sponsored by: Brahn Bailey Placed 4'th

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/26/2019 5:40:00 AM

excellent expression

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/17/2018 1:38:00 PM

Hello Winged Warrior, the water is healing soothing to the soul. Have a nice day my friend.

Lewis Raynes

Date: 9/16/2018 9:09:00 PM

so well crafted WW, congratulations on ur placement.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/13/2018 11:56:00 PM

Congratulations, WW on your win with a beautiful verse.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/13/2018 4:04:00 PM

There is something magical about the waves, the tender touch of the sea. Even if the waters caress is sometimes playful. Congratulations Winged Warrior, on this win. :) Brandy

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/13/2018 3:52:00 PM

Lovely, WW. Congrats on your win.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/13/2018 3:42:00 PM

Back with congratulations WW. Tom

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2018 3:16:00 PM

Love this one . Congrats on the win.

P.M. Richter

Date: 9/12/2018 10:58:00 PM

I love it.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/12/2018 5:26:00 PM

Wow! Good one. Reads like it is a good contender.. Way to go. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/12/2018 12:58:00 PM

Moving use of romantic metaphor, WW! Janice Canerdy

Bette Bavington

Date: 9/12/2018 9:03:00 AM

A moonlit night. A lone soul walking the beach gives one the idea that they could be missing some one. It's a very express poem with romantic tendencies. Well done.

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/11/2018 8:58:00 PM

Oh, the poignancy of your superb poem reaches me deeply, WW.. Your radiant talent ripples endlessly, my wicked sib.. Much love and warmest wishes to you, your twis sis :))