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Ripples of Liquid Luna Lace

Ripples of liquid luna lace

caress the surface of the sea.

Night is blessing us with its grace -

ripples of liquid luna lace.

In moon’s soft glow, I touch the face

of my sweet love as tenderly

ripples of liquid luna lace

caress the surface of the sea.


March 10, 2019 for Chantelle Anne Cooke's Liquid Luna Lace Poetry Contest

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Allen Beilschmidt Sr. Date: 4/4/2019 10:07:00 PM Beautiful tie in to your love and the Luna Lace. well crated and flowing Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 3/19/2019 6:27:00 PM Congrats on your win Andrea.. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 3/18/2019 1:35:00 PM Lovely form and you've done a wonderful job, dear friend, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve`~* Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 3/18/2019 11:12:00 AM you weave a masterfully woven moonrise herein. Beautifully done Andrea Login to Reply

Ann Gilmour Date: 3/18/2019 2:21:00 AM OOOOH... such a gloriously beautiful Triolet Andrea, like liquid chocolate,mmm! many congrats on your top place, so well deserved. Kindest thoughts Ann xx A FAV for me... Login to Reply

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 3/18/2019 12:46:00 AM Congratulations, Andrea on your great win with such a romantic lunar Triolet. Login to Reply

Debjani Mitra Date: 3/18/2019 12:12:00 AM such a soft and sweet little poem...it captures the lunar beauty so well...only a poetess like you can create this magic Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 3/13/2019 12:08:00 PM Andrea, this is so beautifully written, a winner for me ~ Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 3/11/2019 7:33:00 AM so much said in such few words. so elegant, love it, good luck! :)-luloo Login to Reply

Agnes Krampe Date: 3/10/2019 7:04:00 PM Wow, what a fabulous triolet, Andrea! Login to Reply

James Horn Date: 3/10/2019 5:20:00 PM Allow me to have hope and much; Free me from sin's and death's touch, So that my dear Lord I learn to serve; Only receive what I need and deserve. Envelope me with all of your essence, Enjoy and appreciate each pleasance; Perfect place in heaven surely save. Finish for me. After rising me up from my grave. Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/10/2019 5:19:00 PM Lace is perfect imagery for both Andrea. I am busy with the girls today. They are eating lunch so I stole away to read a couple poems. : ) xxoo Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 3/10/2019 4:54:00 PM Beautiful write Andrea..I like the romantic touch...best wishes...soupmail Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 3/10/2019 4:47:00 PM Reminds of moonlit picnics by the ocean with bonfires and music when I was a teen. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 3/10/2019 3:25:00 PM WoW! Andrea, You well written write reminded me of why I love to gaze at a moonlit night. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/10/2019 2:58:00 PM Lovely verse Andrea, can just see the moonglow on the sea. Good luck. Tom. Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/10/2019 2:11:00 PM Beautiful flow to your charming poem, Andrea. Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 3/10/2019 1:23:00 PM Just beautiful. BG Login to Reply