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Ripples

Sitting in the corner watching ripples in my beer
I blink away the wetness but those ripples reappear
This used to be our corner and my grin was ear to ear
But now I sit alone here watching ripples in my beer

Was it careful scheming, did it happen on a whim
And if it had to happen did it have to be with him
My trusted wife and one true friend; our little group drank here
But now it’s only me that sees the ripples in my beer

A microwave, a meal for one, an armchair for a bed
Cannot entice me from this place I now call home instead
I should confront the barman for he still puts three seats here
But I don’t wish to advertise the ripples in my beer

I know I must accept that soon they’ll tell me I must leave
The world will not adjust its diary just cos people grieve
Thankfully the place I once called home is fairly near
So I’ll spend these last moments watching ripples in my beer

I’ll slump into my armchair once I’ve laid her supper out
And dream that I awake to hear her footsteps move about
I know I’m slightly squiffy but my insight now is clear
If I drink up there won’t be any ripples in my beer

My wife can take that slimy toad and crawl under a log
They can have each other if they just return my dog
My sidekick and my kemosabe, she was ever near
Without my dog here at my feet, there’s ripples in my beer.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 11:47 AM
this is truly an inventive way of describing heartache. Like Ilene, I really loved the ending
Flood Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 2:48 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Strange how things go… I began writing this with an old gag in mind and found it taking a more serious slant. Glad you enjoyed.
Wolf Avatar
August 3, 2023 at 7:15 PM
Talk about a 'ripple effect!!' Enjoyed, Terry. Thanks, gw
Flood Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 2:44 PM
Thanks, GW. My ‘funny’ head must have had a day off for this one. Terry
Bauer Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 12:20 PM
You sure know how to tell a story, Terry, especially to someone who’s a sucker for perfect rhyme! Nice twist at the end too…
Flood Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 2:39 PM
Thanks, Ilene. Glad you enjoyed.
Lane Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 3:46 AM
It would seem you're better off with your pup. Beer and doggie treats on the bar tells me which you'd rather have with you. Dogs are always loyal.
Flood Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 7:17 AM
Thank-you, Lin. I borrowed the beer from pixabay… except it was water. Managed to recolour it to something approaching weak tea, but it served a purpose. ;-)
Meadows Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 3:32 AM
A good poem. Well written.
Flood Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 7:13 AM
Thank-you Jeanette. Appreciate your visit. Terry
Merryman Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 8:25 PM
Terry, your poem flows so smoothly. I like the twist in the end! Blessings, Kim M
Flood Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 7:11 AM
Thank-you, Kim. Was gearing this around the old ‘I really miss him (the friend) gag. My ‘pen’ decided that that was too corny. Terry
M  Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 5:44 PM
Brilliant poem Terry….Brilliant!! I read it a couple of times….sad and touching….love this one! Debx
Flood Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 7:09 AM
Thanks, Deb. Must have had my soppy head on ;-). Glad you ‘enjoyed’.
Allison Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 3:55 PM
eek the ultimate betrayal Terry - yeah the final stanza is a perfect ending - get the dog its far more loyal than any other human , is always pleased to see you and gives you slobbery wet kisses lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Flood Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 7:08 AM
Aw, shucks.
Allison Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 4:16 PM
they would be mad to leave you lol!
Flood Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 4:01 PM
Thanks, Jan. Sat here a couple of evenings with some attempts at wit… ideas thin, it seems. Maybe a few I could tinker with. Don’t know where ‘Ripples’ came from. All imagined… I mean, who in their right mind would leave ME? ;-)
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