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Sitting in the corner watching ripples in my beer I blink away the wetness but those ripples reappear This used to be our corner and my grin was ear to ear But now I sit alone here watching ripples in my beer Was it careful scheming, did it happen on a whim And if it had to happen did it have to be with him My trusted wife and one true friend; our little group drank here But now it’s only me that sees the ripples in my beer A microwave, a meal for one, an armchair for a bed Cannot entice me from this place I now call home instead I should confront the barman for he still puts three seats here But I don’t wish to advertise the ripples in my beer I know I must accept that soon they’ll tell me I must leave The world will not adjust its diary just cos people grieve Thankfully the place I once called home is fairly near So I’ll spend these last moments watching ripples in my beer I’ll slump into my armchair once I’ve laid her supper out And dream that I awake to hear her footsteps move about I know I’m slightly squiffy but my insight now is clear If I drink up there won’t be any ripples in my beer My wife can take that slimy toad and crawl under a log They can have each other if they just return my dog My sidekick and my kemosabe, she was ever near Without my dog here at my feet, there’s ripples in my beer.

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Date: 8/5/2023 11:47:00 AM
this is truly an inventive way of describing heartache. Like Ilene, I really loved the ending
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Date: 8/5/2023 2:48:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Strange how things go… I began writing this with an old gag in mind and found it taking a more serious slant. Glad you enjoyed.
Date: 8/3/2023 7:15:00 PM
Talk about a 'ripple effect!!' Enjoyed, Terry. Thanks, gw
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Date: 8/5/2023 2:44:00 PM
Thanks, GW. My ‘funny’ head must have had a day off for this one. Terry
Date: 8/2/2023 12:20:00 PM
You sure know how to tell a story, Terry, especially to someone who’s a sucker for perfect rhyme! Nice twist at the end too…
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Date: 8/5/2023 2:39:00 PM
Thanks, Ilene. Glad you enjoyed.
Date: 8/2/2023 3:46:00 AM
It would seem you're better off with your pup. Beer and doggie treats on the bar tells me which you'd rather have with you. Dogs are always loyal.
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Date: 8/2/2023 7:17:00 AM
Thank-you, Lin. I borrowed the beer from pixabay… except it was water. Managed to recolour it to something approaching weak tea, but it served a purpose. ;-)
Date: 8/2/2023 3:32:00 AM
A good poem. Well written.
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Date: 8/2/2023 7:13:00 AM
Thank-you Jeanette. Appreciate your visit. Terry
Date: 8/1/2023 8:25:00 PM
Terry, your poem flows so smoothly. I like the twist in the end! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/2/2023 7:11:00 AM
Thank-you, Kim. Was gearing this around the old ‘I really miss him (the friend) gag. My ‘pen’ decided that that was too corny. Terry
Date: 8/1/2023 5:44:00 PM
Brilliant poem Terry….Brilliant!! I read it a couple of times….sad and touching….love this one! Debx
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Date: 8/2/2023 7:09:00 AM
Thanks, Deb. Must have had my soppy head on ;-). Glad you ‘enjoyed’.
Date: 8/1/2023 3:55:00 PM
eek the ultimate betrayal Terry - yeah the final stanza is a perfect ending - get the dog its far more loyal than any other human , is always pleased to see you and gives you slobbery wet kisses lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/2/2023 7:08:00 AM
Aw, shucks.
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/1/2023 4:16:00 PM
they would be mad to leave you lol!
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Date: 8/1/2023 4:01:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. Sat here a couple of evenings with some attempts at wit… ideas thin, it seems. Maybe a few I could tinker with. Don’t know where ‘Ripples’ came from. All imagined… I mean, who in their right mind would leave ME? ;-)

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