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Ripple of Fear

A ripple of fear disturbed the birds, sounds of war exploding on earth. ~ ~ ~ ~ 19th February 2023 A Ripple To Me 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: JCB Brul

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/21/2023 5:32:00 PM

Congratulations!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/22/2023 1:17:00 AM

Thank you Kim… Belle

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2023 4:04:00 PM

killing two birds with one stone. Well done.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/21/2023 3:41:00 PM

Indeed, that’s what war does. Thank you Andrea… Belle

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/19/2023 7:23:00 PM

Scattered the birds too, I imagine.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/21/2023 3:40:00 PM

War is bound to scatter the birds. Thank you Gershon. Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/19/2023 6:15:00 AM

Lovely Monoku, Belle. Internally we may be roiling with agony and fear, yet we mask it with fabricated waves of cheerfulness. Win Big

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/21/2023 3:39:00 PM

Thank you Sotto, yes fear we have to mask for the conflicts that many are having to face in what could be and should be a wonderful world… Belle

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/19/2023 6:14:00 AM

Very good! So sad for all of nature suffers with man.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/21/2023 3:33:00 PM

Thank you Kim, it’s very sad that nature suffers for the conflicts of war… Belle

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/19/2023 5:17:00 AM

- Both people and animals get scared ... well written, Belle - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/21/2023 3:26:00 PM

So true Anne-Lise, it’s horrific what people, creatures and birds go through in the face of war. Hugs, Belle :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/19/2023 3:53:00 AM

We all quiver at the sight of war including birds, well done my friend winning wishes

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/21/2023 3:22:00 PM

Thank you Rose, the way things are puts fear into everyone’s heart… Belle

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/19/2023 3:35:00 AM

Oh!! Whoa!! I can't imagine what the people, children and nature are thinking, feeling and anticipating in this situation. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my page. This one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/21/2023 3:18:00 PM

Thank you Sara, can’t imagine what the future holds for the generations to come, it’s so sad that things have become so bad… Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/19/2023 1:10:00 AM

We need to be all afraid. Will there be a WW3?

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/19/2023 1:24:00 AM

Who knows Victor, the world is unpredictable now more than ever. Thank you… Belle

Yann Rolland

Date: 2/18/2023 8:39:00 PM

excellent, so true and poetical

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/18/2023 8:52:00 PM

Thank you Yann, much appreciated… Belle