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he watched her, lying there in the grass, among flowers, the cherry petals covering her slowly… he suddenly realized how sweet was the shadow touching her and each flower gently offering its tribute of death to her was no less beautiful than that wonderful crimson bloom he himself had helped birth on her chest… the nectar of that flower still on his hands and the ethereality of the cherry-tree shade on his retina, he wished to grow roots and draw life from the very earth that she, his masterpiece, was slowly beginning to become

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Date: 12/5/2024 1:33:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 10:38:00 AM
Liliana Negoi,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:22:00 PM
Hello Liliana, this is a great write... enjoyed. SKAT
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