Ripper

he watched her,
lying there in the grass, among flowers,
the cherry petals covering her slowly…
he suddenly realized
how sweet was the shadow
touching her
and each flower gently offering
its tribute of death to her
was no less beautiful
than that wonderful crimson bloom
he himself had helped birth
on her chest…
the nectar of that flower still on his hands
and the ethereality of the cherry-tree shade on his retina,
he wished to grow roots
and draw life from the very earth that she,
his masterpiece,
was slowly
beginning to become
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 1:33 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 7, 2016 at 10:38 AM
Liliana Negoi,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 12, 2016 at 2:22 PM
Hello Liliana, this is a great write... enjoyed. SKAT
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