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Ring My Bell

....................................................O Bluebell I fall in love with your purple splendor that pulls me sternly to your tide like the pulley pulls the bell to its stride I adore the marvel of God My faith Bloom 30 June 2021 Ring My Bell Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Anderson

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/30/2021 10:50:00 AM

Hello Christural, the bluebells are a beautiful flower. I like the shapes that they are in a bell. Blessings my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/1/2021 10:45:00 AM

Hello Alexis Christural, you are very welcome my friend.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/30/2021 8:24:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/30/2021 9:49:00 AM

One blank line after every line just like you separate paragraph or stanzas in poems

Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/30/2021 10:37:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/30/2021 8:14:00 AM

Dear Christuraj, your imagery is absolutely splendid. Appreciative beauty spills easily from your faithful pen. Gorgeous poetic lines, especially; "like the pulley pulls the bell to its stride" - such expressive artistry. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/30/2021 8:19:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/30/2021 7:53:00 AM

Lovely imagery. Sponsor said use single spacing between lines. All the best for contest

Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/30/2021 8:06:00 AM

In fact, I do not know to set it. I shall try. Thank you very much for informing me of this.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/30/2021 7:56:00 AM

Thank you very much.