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Right There

it was right there in the shadows an abstruse moon overhead abandoning the lonely night sky I became (en)rich(ed) winds blown in from the horizon a mere two interloped as one inherent in-between breaths birthing the break of dawn I was blind not by the sun but the beauty undercover connected to the sultry of fine fashion brushing back the senses tingling the receptors cutting up the edges distinction engulfing attraction it was there right there in the darkness I found the light

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Date: 5/15/2020 9:13:00 AM
This paints a nice image on my mind.
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Ts Poetry
Date: 5/15/2020 11:40:00 AM
Thanks Rick
Date: 5/12/2020 1:16:00 AM
I read somewhere....;) you have to be very careful around abstruse (I had to get my Funk 'N' Wagnell out to check the meaning) Moons. I'm with Paghunda Zahid, "stay safe", but heck....sometimes you just have to take the risk. God this is EXHAUSTING...
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 5/12/2020 7:01:00 AM
https://youtu.be/J7UwSVsiwzI
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Date: 5/12/2020 5:47:00 AM
We need to cut open the coop and let the chickens run wild and free
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 5/12/2020 1:24:00 AM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/soul_surfer_967776
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 5/12/2020 1:16:00 AM
Please do not send me directly to Hell for using thy lord God's name in vain, I am sure he will forgive me this indiscretion....for once.
Date: 5/11/2020 7:05:00 PM
Beautiful imagery... Beautiful poem!! Stay safe
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Date: 5/12/2020 5:46:00 AM
Thank you Paghunda

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