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Right Here In My Heart

You still s u r f a c e me, like pebbles on a beach- longing to be quenched by a tide. You still comfort me like a baby’s warm fleece blanket- warmth embraced by your side. An hourglass longs to be free from sand, yet craves the grains to embrace once again- I still long for you to take my loyal hand, time standing still…forever til’ the end. You still b e l i e v e in me, like a trusted angel you adore- enveloped in my wings. You still touch me with chills like a fever rushing down my spine- when you laugh, my heart sings. It’s been so long and God had us designed, an architectural projection made with love- For we are passion and beauty combined, entrusted to each other, from heaven above. You still w a t c h me with laughter, like an old nineteen sixty’s sitcom- you always have right from the start. You still bring me contentment, such ease when in your arms- for you will always be...right here in my heart. May 25, 2017

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Date: 10/22/2018 4:45:00 PM
Lovely, Lu Loo. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 10/18/2018 7:08:00 PM
Nicely done, LuLoo - congratulations on your win in Brian's contest - blessings, and "write on", my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 6/15/2017 10:45:00 AM
Luloo, congrats on your placement with this lovely poem of moving similes and metaphors! Janice
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Date: 5/29/2017 4:41:00 PM
Congratulations on this new win, Luloo! Janice
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Date: 5/27/2017 1:02:00 PM
This is beautiful, it's sad but loving and caring. Congrats on the win, and all the best to you!
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Date: 5/27/2017 4:40:00 AM
What a beautiful poem on lasting love and contentment. Reminds me of what I am missing Laura.
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Date: 5/27/2017 2:01:00 AM
A very well deserved beauty of a poem, Laura Loo!! BIG congratulations on this one. (It's strange not to have the 7 rating to reach out and give!)
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Date: 5/26/2017 6:06:00 PM
So beautiful! Congrats, Luloo!
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/26/2017 9:42:00 PM
thank you lovely Kim! :)
Date: 5/26/2017 3:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem, Luloo! Janice
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/26/2017 9:42:00 PM
many thanks sweet Janice! :)

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