Home » Poems » Winged Warrior » Right Here In My Heart

Right Here In My Heart

A silhouetted shattered shell, within a distant dormant dwell Eternally exists a place I call home, at rivers edge a restless roam Only I can reclusively reside, thru echoic emotions of love denied Scarlet seeds of a seductive start...right here...in my heart... May.22.2017 RIGHT HERE IN MY HEART - Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/23/2017 5:46:00 PM

This is perfect WW! Its content has just enough light and dark shades. I hope it does well in the contest! 7 ; )

John Hamilton

Date: 5/23/2017 10:22:00 AM

Love the alliteration and internal rhymes WW, short but full of meaning, leaves me wanting more! Will do well in the contest!

Lin Lane

Date: 5/23/2017 8:38:00 AM

Oh my, ^WW^. You've captured the soul of a wounded being in this one. The amount of alliteration is just right to enhance and not detract. ;-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/23/2017 2:59:00 AM

- A lovely poem, W.W. ... love the last line especially :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)