Riding the Clouds -Sara Kendrick
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It seems that a weak sun is trying to penetrate my cloud~
A cloud so heavy filled with moisture it drips steadily
Black ominous, not described as light and fluffy so hey you get off my cloud
For the swallows dart about through the damp thickness like bats who fly at night
Let's try to make my cloud go away
Don't let it stay, clear it for future generations
This cloud will engulf the wildest teen
A cloud of destruction for our future generations
How can our youth survive what has been placed around them
A steady availability of illegal substance
A diet that is totally unhealthy
Violent games on gaming systems
Teaching of right removed from the schools
My cloud is heavy, chilling, swirling, damp, penetrating the core of society
Citizens what can we do?
Remember Rome did not fall in a day internal decay ate away its foundation
A cloud of decay is consuming our precious society
What can we do to redeem our future?
Think it through what can we do__
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Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2015
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