Riding My Whims

I no longer love country music
Or Afton, Wyoming just to be the girl
In someone's non-existent dreams
Indulging in a glass of wine
Isn't a thinking session of
Second guesses to philoso-fry myself
 
Conflicted as a child, repressed from lies 
Found under stacks of girly magazines and
Booze, hidden in the basement by
Role models as they lectured
About the importance of virtue and Scriptures
 
In control, on a journey of my own
Where I'll end up, no idea, but it must be
Better than being strung along to
To the wrong song, sung off key
 
I built a bonfire and burned the inclinations of
Fitting into skinny jeans, quitting bad habits
Well most of them, I've re-invented myself
Through the unkindness of cold winters that
No longer plague in phantomed shadows
 
I gave myself permission to wreak havoc, when necessary
And sneak outside to play in my best Sunday shoes
Not playin' by their rules
 
It's 'Wild About Pink' lipstick, clad in shiny kick a** boots
Attending a Mad Hatter's tea party, yes
Riding my whims as they change, just like the seasons
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Sergi Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 10:55 AM
A very strong and powerful poem about being in control of your own destiny. An apt title for the poem. I'm a fan. Also, thank you for your comment on my poem The Crumb
Anglesey Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 11:04 AM
Ralph, thank you very much :)
Hood Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 8:10 PM
Karen... I give myself permission to wreak havoc. Not just when necessary but because i can. I love you.
Anglesey Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 11:42 AM
a bleated thank you to your comment. So nice to see your quality work posted on this site !
Rain Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 2:06 PM
You have put me there , this poem ..amongst my poems ! My Gosh , I am truly humbled. To have you even comment , what a gift !
Anglesey Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 3:55 PM
yvette...thank you so much for the most gracious and humbling comments :)
Asoll Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 3:42 AM
"I've re-invented myself Through the unkindness of cold winters that No longer plague in phantomed shadows" Damn right, I love that bit! I seem to think everyone has to get to a stage in their life where they're so fed up of the pain and uncertainty is too much to simply follow others, and you have to find yourself or re-invent yourself to survive. The style of this reminds me a bit of Carol Anne Duffy, not sure why, except a lot more meaning than her poetry.
Anglesey Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 6:35 AM
WOW Aiden. Thank you for the intense review. I will have to read up on Carol Anne Duffy. Thank you so much for your detailed comments.
Hopkins Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 7:41 PM
darn toot'n straight! really like the attitude of this one!
Anglesey Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 7:47 PM
Oh yeah, me too thank you :)
Deschler Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 2:48 PM
This is a fun and whimsical poem that I can relate to! Sometimes we females are more unpredictable and fun that way, even when we don't know what we want, or what we are doing. Great write! I enjoyed it! And, thank you for the nice comments on my poem "Scarred Heart". It really means so much to me!
Anglesey Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 3:41 PM
Thank you for commentin. I appreciate your detailed feedback. I enjoy finding out what makes other people tick. I like your perception. Thanks !
Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 11:15 PM
I bet this one scored really high on Deb's list. I am sure I saw it before, and I see it won. BIG congrats, dear.
Anglesey Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 6:45 AM
Andrea, thank you :)
Richards Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 11:08 AM
Terrific poem of a journey taken by one whose experience has taught that one creates her own destiny....takes control, and sing in her own key !! Love the spunk of your spirit !
Anglesey Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 12:52 PM
Carrie, I really appreciate that you expressed how the poem made you feel. Your comments are very much appreciated :)
A  Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 9:47 AM
Karen, it is a nice win :-) Congrats... love ~SKAT~
Anglesey Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 9:19 PM
SKAT...thank you !
Jones Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 8:14 AM
Congratulations Karen....sorry you were disappointed by someone you loved..
Anglesey Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 9:17 PM
Donna, on bot on both sides of of the disappointments at some point ee need to get in tune with our self....thsnk you for yout comments.
Haick Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 9:05 PM
Congratulations, Karen! Love it! Wonderful!
Anglesey Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 9:14 PM
Annalise...thanks a bunch !
Johnson Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 8:10 PM
There you go girl. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Anglesey Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 9:13 PM
Joyce..I appreciate your comments...thank you :)
A   Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 7:51 PM
Karen, a nice little win..Congratulations, In DG's "Dream On" contest... xox~Linda
Anglesey Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 9:11 PM
Linda...thank you for the acknowledgements :)
Manassian Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 12:19 PM
Coming back to say....CONGRATS! :) Girl rising and making a stir! More power to ya!
Anglesey Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 9:10 PM
Eileen...you are amazing and thank you:)
A  Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 9:51 AM
Karen, Congratulations!!! ~SKAT~
Anglesey Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 11:06 AM
SKAT...thank you very much :)
A   Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 9:04 AM
Karen, an awesome win... Congratulations in Richard's "Girl Rising." contest.... always *LINDA
Anglesey Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 11:05 AM
Linda, thank you for the support. You are awesome :)
May Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 8:18 AM
congrats on a fine win Karen
Anglesey Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 11:05 AM
Joseph, thank you very much :)
Lamoureux Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 8:05 AM
Love it, congrats and thanks
Anglesey Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 11:04 AM
Richard, and I thank you for asking me to submit to your contest. I am honored :)
Manassian Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 10:20 PM
Karen....nothing like being liberated by you own hands. Powerful....deep...touching. :-)
Anglesey Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 11:04 AM
Eileen, thank you for the thoughtful comments. :)
Goff Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 6:15 AM
I like it Karen! Original....Creative! jimbo
Anglesey Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 8:30 AM
Jimbo...thank you for the nice comments...have a grear day
Ferry Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 5:21 PM
Glad I checked it out..Great write
Anglesey Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 7:14 PM
Hi Richard, thank you for checking this put. Much appreciated and have a super night :)
Breidenthal Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 3:58 PM
A really cool poem! Love your mad hatter line in particular but the entire verse was great. Why settle for someone else's standards? You''ve shown through this poem that you will not be held back. You have the freedom to express and do. The last lines in very stylish too. Keep up the great work. Always, Laura
Anglesey Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 7:14 PM
Laura, Thank you for the great comments. Have a wonderful evening :)
Horsman Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 2:17 PM
my kind of poetry, and you have written a gem here makes me think, wow, and just look at her now! amazing just love this...
Anglesey Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 3:33 PM
Thank you very much for the nice comments. So very much appreciated :)
Lamoureux Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 10:22 AM
Glad you took my advice! Have a great day.
Anglesey Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 10:50 AM
Thank you and my day just got better :)
Horne Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 12:33 AM
good for you - wish I could go to the Mad Hatter's tea party too, lol. Congrats on your wins : )
Anglesey Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 6:30 AM
Jsck...thank you... I am sure there are plenty of seats at the madhatter's table...:)
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