Riding Horses With Dad

I weave through the rocks of a rough winding trail
Up through the boulders and sage
Following a ridge to the top of the hill
I'm a young girl, who's coming of age

I am sitting astride a strawberry roan
My Dad rides ahead in the haze
Climbing the crest, they're sure-footed, and know
of a place to take rest, where the horses can graze

The clouds pass over, like ships setting sail
Casting shadows on the valleys below
The sky wears a palette of rose colored, pale
Our pace resumes, quiet and slow

Our voices are silent,  all our words have been said
Just a whisper of bird wings, and a wisp of the chill
Our thoughts take our eyes, to a sun, scarlet red
Where it soon disappears, far over the hills

My Dad goes ahead, and has taken the lead
Lost in a mist, my eyes try to see
My mare tries to follow, and everything blurs
We continue our climb,  to reach forest timber
Are those voices I hear, or just birds in the air?

Up he goes on the trail, on his faithful old steed, like a dream fading into the clouds..
He is smiling, my Dad,.. on his red sorrel mare,

         .......while I stay behind to remember







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6/19/2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Maverick Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 5:22 PM
I see the very rich memory here Carrie many warm wishes on its placing..'
A  Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 11:52 AM
CARRIE. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**
Allison Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 9:29 AM
such wonderful memories Carrie a delight to read your beautiful poem - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Lindley Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 9:08 AM
Very inspiring and beautiful poem my friend. Memories are the greatest treasure we may have of those taken from us. Congrats on your win my friend. A7
Trichet Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 10:33 PM
Memories to cherish, and what better way to record them in this wonderful poem... Congrats Carrie :)
Hamilton Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 8:35 PM
always sad for those left behind Carrie a fine tribute congrats on placing hugshugs
Johnson Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 5:39 PM
This gave me goose pimples in the final verses. You were painting such a loving picture. But I know you have lovely memories. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Onclaud Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 12:52 PM
loving remembrances of your dad, carrie.. it's the year of the horse!.. sweet congrats on your well-deserved award!.. huggs
Mehta Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 5:10 AM
Enjoyed the emotional write and congrats on the fine win, carrie
Gasun Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 3:10 AM
Congratulations my dear friend Carrie . Thank you so much for your full support! Biggest hugs! Love lots, Leonora
Dillard Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 3:19 PM
I should have commented on this one two years ago. I know you better now, and I know that some of your fondest memories are of riding with your father. He would like this tribute as much as the rest of us. What a beautiful ending!
Ryerson Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 3:24 AM
'My dream fading into the clouds' and 'No words are spoken, they have all been said'...Two of many of my fav lines in this haunting beauty...Congrats my friend! - Tim
May Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 8:49 PM
great write and win....congrats
Gildersleeve Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 5:03 PM
A fabulous image you have conveyed in your dream poem. Congratulations Carrie. A well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Roberts Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 12:55 AM
Carrie this memory/dream has made me speechless. Congrats...Seren
Bono Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 9:47 PM
love the good memories.congrats on a well deserve win.
Brown Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 1:10 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Emotional" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 12:14 PM
carrie congrats on your win,very moving ..David
Long Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 10:27 AM
congrats on your win cory
A   Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 10:11 AM
Carrie, congratulations with your emotional poem! Thank you very much for sharing something so emotional with us. Some poems, are tough to express and share out in the open. God Bless. Always~ PD
Freeman Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 1:27 PM
Carrie, Great to see you in the winner circle friend. Agape, Moses
Phookan Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 1:11 AM
Sweet remembrances from those childhood days..Loved this write of you as a lil' girl riding with your dad.. Congrats Carrie on your win and for this beautiful composition . love, gautami
Scripca Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 9:04 PM
"He is smiling, my Dad,.. on his sorrel brown .......And I stay behind to remember" What a nostalgic last line...from a real born poetess...Congratulations on your wonderful, as usual, poem! Love, your friend, iolanda Giddy-up! :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 8:12 PM
the last line is astounding, Wonderful as always, Carrie.How many exceptional poems like these do you now have in your collection?
Taylor Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 4:27 PM
Congrats on your win, Carrie. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
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