Ridge Line

from the ridge line, with the mountain breeze
among saguaro and mesquite trees
a lone rider spurs his horse
and from a distance lassos my heart

not riding off into the sunset
he has a thirst he needs to whet
in the valley the oasis waits
drink your fill, drink your fill
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 19, 2010 at 12:20 PM
Well the weekend is upon us and I am trying to get as many poems read as possible today as I will be gone most of the weekend from the Soup. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration J.B. Love, Carol
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March 18, 2010 at 10:58 PM
I loved this. Romantic and visual.
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