Ride Susan Ride

Susan Lawrence saddled her horse
(a Pegasus who flew off course)
The stars and the moon
Lit up the lagoon
Reflecting a greater life force
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George Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 8:57 PM
Susan is indeed a Pegasus .... ! A lovely compliment to her, Rico
Canerdy Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 12:15 PM
Very imaginative, Rico. Janice
Faulkner Avatar
May 6, 2022 at 5:20 PM
Lucky her, I wish I could ride a Pegasus :)
Kendrick Avatar
May 6, 2022 at 2:06 PM
Creative Limerick. A great imagination you have. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
May 6, 2022 at 1:47 AM
Great limerick. Wish I could write like that. I only have a few.
Leffanta Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 11:09 AM
I see you have read Susan's poems so just put pen to paper as I am sure you can do better than this! Aloha!
Babcock Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 8:13 PM
Wonderful limerick. love phyl
Anaya Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 6:24 PM
Imagery of a beautiful Susan on her white winged horse who leads her to a new life, wow Rico. Susane Lawrence will love this, no horsing around.
Leiser Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 12:11 PM
I love how you personify the constellations, Rico. Nicely done! :)
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