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Ride Susan Ride

Susan Lawrence saddled her horse (a Pegasus who flew off course) The stars and the moon Lit up the lagoon Reflecting a greater life force

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Valsa George

Date: 5/30/2022 8:57:00 PM

Susan is indeed a Pegasus .... ! A lovely compliment to her, Rico

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/10/2022 12:15:00 PM

Very imaginative, Rico. Janice

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/6/2022 5:20:00 PM

Lucky her, I wish I could ride a Pegasus :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/6/2022 2:06:00 PM

Creative Limerick. A great imagination you have. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/6/2022 1:47:00 AM

Great limerick. Wish I could write like that. I only have a few.

Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/7/2022 11:09:00 AM

I see you have read Susan's poems so just put pen to paper as I am sure you can do better than this! Aloha!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/5/2022 8:13:00 PM

Wonderful limerick. love phyl

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/5/2022 6:24:00 PM

Imagery of a beautiful Susan on her white winged horse who leads her to a new life, wow Rico. Susane Lawrence will love this, no horsing around.

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/5/2022 12:11:00 PM

I love how you personify the constellations, Rico. Nicely done! :)