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Ride home from the beach

05/09/2018 a sea of salt sand populates swimsuit waistband the oceans wet itch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/9/2018 7:14:00 AM
Giggles! Awesome :)
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The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/10/2018 7:55:00 AM
Delete? No, add. Mick want's entries to his contest dated. :)
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Charlie Knowlton
Date: 5/9/2018 11:55:00 AM
How do I delete the date?
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Charlie Knowlton
Date: 5/9/2018 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Maureen. Got your email too.
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The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/9/2018 7:16:00 AM
Soup mailing you
Date: 5/9/2018 6:34:00 AM
I had to howl at this one. I am applauding you. This haiku is a "wow" for me.
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Charlie Knowlton
Date: 5/9/2018 6:36:00 AM
Hi Caren and thanks. Just wrote it for the Haiku contest.